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The Paradox of Control❤️

"Love the story, really enjoyed reading the BDSM kink that not many talk or open up about, it is well written, explained, and interesting, well done, you had me hooked from the start. I recommend this short and fantastic story to everyone.❤️"

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Interesting dynamic

"Interested to see how the dynamic grows with this."

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Great novella on the extreme sides of bdsm

"I loved this short story. There’s a side to BDSM that isn’t always written about so I commend the author for choosing to write about it. Overall, a really good read. My reason for the 4 star review and not 5 star is in the writing not the actual plot which was fantastic. The writing itself had some grammatical errors which was okay but one of the chapters has one massive part which is then repeated underneath it which was confusing. There’s also a chapter with a small paragraph that seems to be a reply to a comment that’s found its way into the story by mistake. "

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