Good plot. Seamless description. Lack of vividness of action description.

"Though the plot has been good so far. It felt like there were some pauses in the story line. Some of the scenes also felt stale. Description of the action taking place in the story was very dry and was not vivid. I personally prefer a writing style which leads me to believe that I am a part of the action or even better action is happening in front of my eyes."