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Awesome book!

"I have read most of Rick Roirdan’s books which dominate this realm of greek mythology and demigods, but I loved the fresh take on everything! I will warn you though the names of referenced greek mythology figures are a bit tough to keep track of!"

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Helen Brave and the Sun Titan

"I liked it a lot and it was very interesting and fantasy-filled. I truly enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of this series or similar books soon."

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Jay

"I really enjoyed this book. Totally can’t wait for the sequel 💃🏽💃🏽"

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Can't stop till i finish

"Absolutely great. Reminds me of Percy Jackson and the Olympian series of books by Rick Riordan which are my favorites but with a twist in the personal preferences of the characters."

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Helen brave and the sun god

"Captivating "

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Helen Brave and The Sun Titan

"Fantastic book! Ii really enjoyed it and I am looking forward to reading more."

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good book

"very good book in the style of rick riordan"

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Love it

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Well done

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Helen Brave and the Sun Titan

"Enjoyed the book overall but difficult to keep track of who’s who. Would help having a character map at beginning to be able to quickly check. Also a fair few spelling/grammar errors. Look forward to the next instalment. Also perhaps a few more good men!"

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Helen Brave and The Sun Titan

"It was an interesting read with Greek Mythology as a basis. However, I felt as if the characters were shallow with no depth to them. Several were introduced and rarely was there anything relayed other than basic information and idle interactions. Zoey and Ginger felt like background characters compared to Elei, Amanda and Helen. While Helen was the most described character, not much is actually told about her perse. Most of it is just background information and a mixed signaled character setting. She was originally described as a shy girl but all of a sudden she wants attention and is jealous of Amanda. The reason for their fight seemed kind of out of her setting as though it was simply used to ditch Amanda for a couple of chapters. The story also felt rushed or too fast-paced especially towards the end, things just happen and I, a reader am dragged along with Helen, just as confused. The romance for me felt like it was just flung in as the author wanted Helen to end up with someone other than Amanda for her to fit perfectly with the whole "jealousy her own undoing" thing backed by a one-sided crush. I thought there was slight hope for her until she was flat-out rejected with all the blushing going on. It may be due to my lack of knowledge in Greek Mythology but at times keeping track of the names of the different characters was confusing, to say the least. Overall, I think it is based on a wonderful story concept that would be even better if things were just fleshed out a bit more."

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