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A collection of my brain rambles, hastily written. Frantically thought up.
I'm a whore for a comma, a slut for an ellipses...
Choke me with a verb.
Woo me with an adjective.
Whip me with hyperboles.
Kiss me with a cumulative sentence.
Leave me with isocolonis.
Am I not descriptive enough? Is there no clear narrative?
I could have been so persuasive. Had I not lost myself in exposition.
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Vinciane: Alors,je vais dire oui et non! Oui, pour le style jeune et drôle et écrit différemment,la trame est bonne et les personnages vraiment sympathiques malgré qu'au début j'ai cru que Lana serait une vraie cruche ! Et non, car par moments on se croirait avec des lycéens,on ne sait pas si ça se passe en F...
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Evtida: It was a very sweet story, but it felt rushed. It didn't really convey the emotions. For example, when the girl was kidnapped, instead of panicking, going crazy, and causing a scene, giving in felt strange... His exaggerated relationship with his gay friend was also odd in my opinion.
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LauraLea: Truly enjoyed this book! I worked with deaf ed in high school so this hit close to home. Will be reading more by this author!!
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XhellionX: Sehr schöne Kurzgeschichte, hab sie gern gelesen. Ein paar Fehler haben sich noch eingeschlichen.
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Natasha Evermoor: This is really intriguing and emotionally intense. I like the way Joshua can truly change, or if Fleur is slowly getting pulled into something dangerous without realizing it. By the way, I love your book cover!
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Joanna: Write is scattered, plot is good, story doesn't make sense she is meant to be a cage fighter hut shows no strength
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MjeyW💖: Encore une belle histoire, touchante et pleine de magie.Magnifique roman à découvrir.
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marta070877: Me encantó la historia es diferente y muy tierna.😍😍
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