Introduction
You ever walk into a room and everyone's just staring at you? because you're the prettiest or the most important person there, Yeah, that's me. Naomi.
NAOMI LORELI MADDEN
"Fuck a hating ass hoe"
Age: 23
Eye color: hazel
Hair type: 3a (back length)
Height: 5'7
Race: black
I didn't come here looking for trouble. I didn't come here looking for love either. But somehow, I walked straight into both, wrapped in expensive suits, whispered in a language I could barely understand, and burned into my skin by the hands of one man: Alejandro.
ALEJANDRO LORENZO GARCÍA
"My empire runs on silence and fear. Family is law, But for you princesa I'll burn it all"
Age: 28
Eye color: blue
Hair type: 2B (black, faded sides)
Height: 6'8
Nationality : Italian/persian
(Has one pierced ear)
Facial hair: Goatee
The man who owns more than he lets on. The man who kisses like sin and threatens like it's a love language. The man everyone in that glittering room bowed to, while I clueless, stubborn, and way too curious just smirked in his face.
This isn't a butterflies and rainbow type of love story, it's blood, sweat, tears and years off a bitch life.
So strap in and prepare cause this gonna be a WILD ride.
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