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The Old Mistake

"There’s a certain ache woven into your words... a sorrow that lingers long after the last line. The tension between them — love, regret, and what’s left unsaid — it bleeds through every moment. It’s raw... haunting... beautiful. Even unfinished, it already feels like a story that remembers its own pain. Impeccable writing, look forward to more❤️‍🔥 "

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Lovely

"I've gotten alot from the first chapter, the fact that Astara has barely said anything but I can already empathize with him shows how good the book already is. The MC is quite humurous, she adds that spark to the story. I really wanna see where their love story is gonna go from here. I'll stick around!"

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