Chapter 1: The Eyes
Eyes could be honest. Eyes could be nice. Eyes could make you fall in love. Eyes could make you hurt. Eyes could make you go delusional. Eyes could mean anything with just one mere look.
Sometimes, eyes could make you want to strangle someone...so bad...till those same eyes bleed out tears...and the pressure felt on their neck pulse...killing them slowly to death...makes them beg with intention...but not the one where they ask you to let go...and rather go on with it.
So, who is it that you want to kill so badly?
Really liked the way you started off the intro—super eerie and scary!🧟♂️🤪 There is a great flow in the first few lines!✨
Really compelling start. Sharp and deep 💜🤔 love the style 💜