What is your opinion?
"Isis and the Valley of Song"
"It seems this story would qualify as a real Fairy Tale and of course, a short story on its own standing. Isis captures the heart and soul of the Queen, her Family and all who are blessed by her presence. It seems that Songs have a magical power of keeping the families safe from the evil goblins, and will bring life to the magic of the souls who proclaim the blessings of the words sung for the benefit of all.........The Queen, in her softness and kind heart proclaimed her Royal caring for her people and Isis, the kindness of her soul for Isis and all who she rules over........the goodness of this story is refreshing, and the ending is really the beginning of Isis's story, even though the book of the Princess does not disclose the name of the Centaur in the story. Isis just smiles, and the story continues..............a few grammar changes but all in all,,,,great story for all to know. Thank you........and continue doing what you do best..........Authoring new and wonderful books/stories for all to enjoy................. william elliott"
Excellent Concept!
"I have yet to read a story quite like the one you've done here. Fantastic! It put a whole new light to the race of centaurs. The plot points were excellent and the twists were unexpected and fantastic. The only complaint I might have is that the characters are a bit wordy and formal at times. It would work for some characters, like the queen, but for an eleven year old girl? I'm not so sure. And there were a few times that there was a lot of information dumped on the reader at once. But you made up for it by a well-executed story! Congrats on that!"
