The Man With No Voice: Book 1 by D. Effler at Inkitt
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The Man with No Voice: Book 1

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Summary

In a world where demons are born from humanity’s last breath, the Demon Queen selects the wicked and reshapes them into her “chosen.” Monsters forged to wage war against humankind.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
D. Effler
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Sound of Silence

The town had no name anymore.

It lay in ruin beneath a moonless sky, a black shape of broken stone and collapsed timber, half-swallowed by a fog that moved like breath: slow, patient, alive. What once might have been streets were now corridors of rubble. Roofs had folded inward. Walls had been peeled open as if by enormous hands. And everywhere, slick with rainless damp, dark stains clung to the ground.

The Man with No Voice walked through it as if it were a dream he’d already had.

His boots crunched softly over shattered glass and wet gravel. The air tasted of ash and old smoke. The fog curled around his legs, tugging at his waist, and still he did not hesitate. His armor bore the dull scarring of travel: nicks, scratches, the faint rust of dried rain; yet he moved with the steadiness of something that did not tire.

Above the town, a hill rose like a grave-mound. At its crown, a chapel stood.

It should have been a sanctuary. Instead it was the only structure that still dared to resemble itself.

The chapel’s stonework remained intact in places, but it had been wounded. A corner of the bell tower had collapsed, spilling rock down the slope like spilled teeth. The stained-glass windows were gone, punched out and shattered, leaving empty eyes that stared down into the fog. A massive crack split the front steps, as if the earth itself had tried to swallow the building and failed.

The Man climbed, silent, one hand steady at his side.

The other carried the weight of an axe that looked too heavy for an ordinary man to lift, and yet it did not drag him down. It hung as if it belonged there, an extension of his purpose.

At the top, the fog thinned enough to reveal what waited at the chapel’s mouth.

Skeletal remains.

Not scattered the way bones looked after age and animals. Not arranged with the mercy of decay. These were left like warnings, piled in heaps and strewn across the chapel’s front yard, tangled limbs and ribcages and skulls with mouths stretched open in permanent astonishment.

There was no flesh.

No organs.

No blood-soaked remnants of humanity, no torn clothing clinging to rot. It was as if something had fed with impossible precision, sucking life clean from bone and leaving only the empty architecture behind.

The Man with No Voice stopped at the first pile.

He did not kneel. He did not flinch. He stared down with a gaze cold enough to make the fog feel warm.

Then he walked forward.

The chapel door hung half-open. Its wood was split in long vertical gashes, as if clawed. Dark blood stained the planks, dried in thick trails that ran down to the threshold. And from within, a glow leaked into the night: orange candlelight, unnatural in its steadiness, casting a warm invitation that felt like mockery.

He stepped around a skull with its jaw still attached.

As he reached for the door, a voice called from the darkness to his left.

“So,” it purred, smooth as oil, old as rot. “I see you’ve come to slay another chosen child of mine.”

The Man froze.

Slowly, he turned his head.

There, a short distance away, standing where the chapel’s light did not reach, was a figure that seemed made of shadow. She was cloaked in a darkness that did not match the night. The fog avoided her. The air around her was wrong, as if reality had decided not to look too closely.

The Demon Queen.

Stories had tried to explain her, and stories always failed. Some painted her as a horned goddess, some as a crowned corpse, some as a woman with a thousand eyes. But the truth was worse than any description.

Because looking at her, the mind searched for shape and found only dread.

She stood with perfect stillness, as though she had been waiting long before he arrived. The edge of candlelight caught the faintest suggestion of a face, beautiful in the way a blade was beautiful, and hungry in the way fire was hungry.

“They whisper your name,” she continued, as if savoring the thought. “A man who does not speak. A man who does not pray.”

The Man with No Voice did not answer.

He simply stared.

Her laughter came quiet and sharp. “Your power and spirit are beyond that of any normal man.” The Demon Queen tilted her head, as if examining a tool. “I could strike you down right now where you stand... but I’ll allow the hands of fate to play their motion.”

The fog shivered. The chapel’s candlelight flickered once, as if frightened.

“But be warned,” she said, and the warmth vanished from her voice, leaving only hate. “If my beloved children do not kill you first... then in the end it will be I who tears your flesh asunder from your frail human bones.”

For a heartbeat, the Demon Queen’s face became clearer, bloodlust carved into every line of it, a smile that promised suffering with reverence. Then she raised one hand, and darkness folded open beside her like a curtain being drawn.

A portal, blacker than night, rimmed with a faint distortion, as if the air was screaming without sound.

She stepped backward into it.

And disappeared.

The portal snapped shut with the finality of a coffin lid.

A moment later, thunder cracked overhead, so close it felt like the sky had split.

Rain poured down.

Not gentle, not cleansing. A torrential downpour that hammered stone and bone alike, turning dust to paste and blood to slick rivers along the chapel steps. The fog thickened again, swallowing the town below, while the storm raged as if it had been summoned by the Demon Queen’s departure.

The Man with No Voice turned back to the half-open door.

Then the screams began.

High, desperate. Children.

“Please, please don’t!”

“Brother, BROTHER!”

Their voices tumbled into the night from inside the chapel, raw with terror, breaking on sobs. The sound cut through the rain like knives.

The Man with No Voice did not quicken. He did not hesitate.

He pushed the chapel door open.

The candlelight spilled over him, and the stench hit like a wall.

Blood.

Fresh, metallic, thick in the air. Rot beneath it. The sour heat of opened bodies. The chapel was lit by dozens of candles set on broken pews, the altar, the floor; an imitation of holiness made obscene.

Skeletal remains littered the stone like discarded kindling. Some were shattered. Some were stacked. Some still wore fragments of prayer beads around finger bones.

And hanging from the ceiling, swaying gently as rainwind breathed through broken windows, was a small metal prison cage.

Inside, two children were crammed together, pressed shoulder to shoulder.

The boy, older, maybe ten, held his sister with shaking arms as if he could shield her with his ribs. The girl’s face was streaked with tears and grime, her mouth open in a silent cry that became sound only when she found the strength to breathe.

Their eyes locked on the doorway.

On him.

Then, slowly, something moved at the chapel’s center.

A hulking purple demon sat on a mound of fresh corpses as if enthroned. Its body was thick with muscle and slick with gore. Bone spikes erupted along its arms and back like a porcupine’s quills. It had three eyes set unevenly into its skull, all three tracking him with animal intelligence.

Its mouth split wide.

Teeth like ivory tusks curved from its jaw, stained black-red. When it breathed, it breathed wetly.

The demon’s claws dug into a ribcage beneath it. It lifted a chunk of meat, chewed, swallowed.

Then it grinned.

“Ahhh,” it rumbled, voice like stones grinding. “Another one.”

The children sobbed louder.

The demon stood.

Its body unfolded with a series of cracks, stretching its spine, rolling its shoulders. Candle flames guttered as it rose, casting monstrous shadows across the walls.

The Man with No Voice stepped fully into the chapel.

The door swung behind him with a slow creak, leaving him in the candlelight.

The demon took one heavy step forward, and another, leaving footprints of blood on the stone.

“You came for them?” it asked, tilting its hornless head toward the cage. “I ate their father while they watched. I left them alive just to hear them beg.”

The boy screamed, “Stop, STOP!”

The demon laughed, deep and delighted. “Look at him trembling. Look at her crying. They taste better when they understand.”

The Man with No Voice said nothing.

He lifted his axe.

The demon’s three eyes narrowed.

Then it lunged.

It moved too fast for something that large. A blur of purple muscle and bone spikes, claws sweeping toward the Man’s throat.

Steel met flesh with a sound like a bell ringing inside a grave.

The Man with No Voice pivoted, letting the claws pass inches from his chest. His axe came down hard enough to split candle wax and stone splatter alike, cleaving into the demon’s shoulder. The blow should have taken its arm off.

Instead the demon snarled and tore itself backward, black blood spraying in thick arcs.

It didn’t retreat far.

It charged again.

The chapel became a storm of motion. The demon slammed pews aside like toys, wood exploding, candles scattering across the floor. The Man moved through the chaos with terrifying calm. Every swing of his axe was measured, efficient; no wasted effort, no flourish.

The demon tried to overpower him.

It tried to crush him.

It tried to impale him on its spikes, to tear him open, to bite.

The Man with No Voice simply did not let it.

He caught the demon’s tusked bite on the axe handle, braced, and shoved.

The demon staggered. The Man stepped in.

One strike split its knee.

Another opened its belly.

A third severed one arm at the elbow, bone spikes and flesh flying. The demon howled, the sound thick with rage, and in its fury it swung the remaining arm wide.

The Man ducked under it, closed the distance, and drove the axe into its spine.

For a second, the demon’s three eyes bulged.

It tried to turn. Tried to reach him.

The Man planted his boot against the demon’s back.

And he pulled.

The axe ripped free. The demon stumbled forward.

The Man followed with a blur of movements that felt less like fighting and more like execution.

A brutal sweep cut through the demon’s waist.

Another strike cleaved across its chest.

Another sheared through its neck.

The demon collapsed in pieces, six jagged sections hitting the chapel floor with wet, heavy impacts.

Silence swallowed the room so suddenly the rain outside sounded louder.

The children stared, shaking.

The demon’s remains twitched.

Black blood oozed.

A low gurgle rose from what was left of its throat.

The Man with No Voice lifted his empty hand.

His fingers spread.

And heat bloomed in the air.

Inferno magick.

Not a gentle flame, not a torch’s flicker. This was a conjured furnace, a living violence. Fire spiraled from his palm in a twisting ribbon, bright orange edged with white. It struck the demon’s remains and devoured them instantly.

Flesh blackened. Bone cracked. Spikes turned to ember.

Within seconds the demon was reduced to ash, drifting across the stone like dark snow.

The candle flames steadied again, as if relieved.

The Man lowered his hand.

The children, still in the cage, did not cheer.

They did not speak.

They watched him the way prey watched a predator, uncertain whether salvation had truly arrived or simply something else with better manners.

He crossed the chapel, stepping through ash and broken wood.

With a single motion he lowered the cage, found its latch, and snapped it open.

The door creaked outward. The boy hesitated, then climbed out first, helping his sister with trembling hands. Her legs nearly gave out when her feet touched the floor. She clung to her brother’s arm, eyes wide, face pale.

They backed away from the Man.

He did not move toward them.

Instead, he reached into the plating of his armor and withdrew a folded piece of paper, protected from blood and rain, kept close as if it mattered more than coin.

He held it out.

The boy stared at the note like it might bite.

Then, slowly, he took it.

The paper was smudged at the edges, but the writing remained clear, curved, familiar strokes.

His mother’s handwriting.

The boy’s breath caught.

He unfolded it with shaking fingers. His sister leaned close, eyes darting across the lines.

Their faces crumpled.

Then the girl began to sob again, not in terror this time, but in something desperate and relieved.

“She’s alive,” the boy whispered, voice breaking. “She’s... she’s alive...”

They clutched the note to their chests as if it were a piece of her.

The memory of their father’s death still sat behind their eyes, the demon’s laughter, the helplessness. The chapel itself had become a wound they would carry forever.

The Man with No Voice watched them without expression.

No comfort.

No pity.

No reassurance.

When their crying softened, he turned and began to walk toward the chapel door.

He stopped at the threshold and looked back once, cold gaze sweeping over them like a command given without words.

Follow.

The children hesitated only a moment, then obeyed.

Outside, the rain still fell hard. The world beyond the chapel was a smear of fog and ruin. The Man led them down the hill and through the destroyed town. The children kept close, hunched, flinching at every shadow, but they did not fall behind.

The night stretched on in wet misery.

Somewhere behind them, the chapel candles guttered out one by one.

Hours passed.

When the storm finally began to weaken, the fog thinned into strips that drifted between trees. By the time the first gray light of dawn pressed against the horizon, the three of them had traveled due north into the forest.

Birds did not sing.

The woods were too quiet.

But ahead, faint and cautious, there was movement: shapes gathered around a low fire, sheltered beneath crude lean-tos and patched canvas. A makeshift camp, thrown together in desperation by those who had escaped the town before it was emptied.

The villagers saw the Man first.

They stiffened. Hands went to knives, to sticks, to anything that could pretend to be a weapon. Fear made them bold for a moment.

Then they saw the children.

A woman surged forward from the camp like a body pulled by a chain.

She was older, her blond hair streaked with gray and rain-damp, her face hollowed by sleeplessness and grief. For a heartbeat she simply stared, unable to believe what her eyes offered her.

Then she screamed their names.

The children ran.

They crashed into her arms, and she dropped to her knees, pulling them close as if she could fuse them back into her ribs. She wept openly, shaking, kissing their hair, their foreheads, their cheeks; each touch a frantic proof that they were real, warm, alive.

“Oh gods, oh gods, you’re here,” she gasped. “You’re here... thank the gods... thank...”

The boy choked out words against her shoulder. The girl sobbed into her neck.

Around them, villagers murmured prayers, astonishment, dread.

The woman finally looked up.

Her gaze met the Man’s.

It faltered.

His stare held no warmth, no triumph, no hint of humanity she could cling to. He looked like a man carved from the same stone as graves.

Still trembling, she stood and fumbled at her belt pouch. Her hands shook so badly she nearly dropped it. The pouch was heavy with silver, though not full.

She pressed it into his free hand without hesitation.

“Thank you,” she said, voice cracking. “No one else would go. I begged everyone. I offered everything I had.” Her throat tightened. “No one had the spine to return. Not for any reward.”

The Man with No Voice closed his fingers around the pouch.

He did not nod.

He did not answer.

The woman swallowed hard, wiping at her face with the back of her hand, as if ashamed of her tears and unable to stop them. “I didn’t mean to leave them,” she whispered, desperate to be understood. “They went to the chapel with my husband to pray, and when the attack happened it was so sudden... so violent... I had no choice but to flee while I could. I thought...” Her voice broke. “I thought they were already...”

She couldn’t finish.

The children clung to her again, and she clung back, shaking.

The Man with No Voice slipped the coin pouch into his armor as if it weighed nothing.

He turned away from the reunion.

Toward the dirt road leading through the forest.

The dawn was rising now, thin, pale light bleeding into the world. It did not feel hopeful. It only revealed what the night had hidden: wet leaves, mud, exhausted faces, and the lingering fear that something watched from the trees.

The Man walked toward the light with the same steady stride he’d carried through the fog.

At the edge of the camp he paused, just long enough for the woman to look up again.

To see him go.

His gaze did not soften.

Then he continued down the road, alone, vanishing between the trees as the sun struggled upward behind him.

And the camp, briefly saved from despair, remained silent, because no one could decide whether they had just been rescued by a man...

...or by something only shaped like one.

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