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Wonderful read
"Love your stories!"
Iris Corrects an Unfortunate Mistake
"I enjoyed this story more after my second reading. I still think the ending could have been better, although I'm not sure how that could have been achieved. But still a job well done! I believe I've read most of your books now - and you're still the best author on here!"
Tales told out of school:4
"A wonderfully written story of love, after an era made by a beautiful young student, and a maintenance man repairing part of a wall connected to changing sheds. From innocence to full blown love, they discover themselves and each other. Well written in the depth of this story and the content in which they are learning what true love is. Another must read, and thanks to a very accomplished writer John Sutherland."
A LOT!!!!!!
"ΤΟ ΛΑΤΡΕΥΩ!!! ΕΧΕΙ ΠΟΛΥ ΩΡΑΙΑ ΠΛΟΚΗ!!! ΝΑΙ ΘΑ ΤΟ ΠΡΟΤΕΙΝΑ ΚΑΙ ΣΕ ΑΛΛΟΥΣ."
Lovely 👍😊👌😊
"All the females in this story are rather bold it's quite enlightening. Tony is such a shy man it's very alluring but also amazing how you managed to create such a character that appeals to your readers - another hint of your daringness revealed. (I have never come across any male in a romance or erotica novel that isn't dominant). Very impressive Mr.Sutherland. I admit I found it quite amusing how the seemingly best solution for Iris to gain full forgiveness from Tony was "let him fuck her" 😂😂. Much expected but surprising none the less. Only one thing threw me for a loop in your short story and that was in chapter 10, I could have sworn the same pair of underwear was removed from Iris twice 🤣🤣(I boiled that down to you being in the heat of the moment when writing this scene frantically removing clothing... Even after it had already been taken off.) Lastly... I read a small quote at the end of one of your chapters that I've fallen in love with as I find it beautiful and somewhat moving. It was your reference to men as "much more fragile, despite what anyone might say". I myself wouldn't think of such things about males much less agree with them however given you are a male writer telling stories from your heart...i feel inclined to empathise to a certain (very small) degree with males as it is true. You never know what's going on beyond the surface. Honestly women find men just as confusing as they find women. Stereotypes and ideologies blind us into thinking and then believing that everything is supposed to be one way "all the time" when truthfully its not. A splendid masterpiece here Mr. Sutherland. Thank you. "
Great coming of age erotic
"Fun story somewhat predictable at times but still a good read."
Johnksutherland's novel
"This novel(s) seems like a good example of old fashioned erotica to me. The wording isn't grotesquely vivid, and I admire the purity, self control and innocence in the males. Absolutely not a stereotypical erotic novel. Thanks, dear author! "
Tales Told Out of School 4.
"Another tastefully written story of adolescent first love. "
Resonates
"Looks at the relationships women and men have with each other. Set in an environment we all know very well this is a story that asks for your apologies. We all make snap judgements but what we do after is what matters the most. In this instance a girl makes an assumption that could easily ruin a young mans reputation. Looking at this as an outsider is a great way to understand what we could all do better. These are captured moments in everyone's life. "
Kapsie
"I liked the story. It is so realistic. Two teens curious and brave enough to explore their security. It's casually eased on to the reader and not brutally explicit. Pure erotic."
Hey
"Di They're both in love "
