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Swain

"Fast paced, unexpected ending, didnt drag with insignificant details. Nice twist at the end. I would read another story by this author"

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Dissapointed

"I am disappointed... In the fact that this turned out to be a short story. I enjoyed the plot and where the author was going... I didn't want the story to end. Well done.. Hopefully the author can turn this into a full length novel.. A novel that I would also love to read. "

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Sharp and Well Written

"I found this short story to be a nice, dark twist on what seemed like a run-of-the-mill serial killer tale. He had solid writing style that is both descriptive and nuanced. Looking forward to more from this author. "

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A twist of terror

"I found the beginning of the story intriguingly delightful. I like how the writer took care to describe these characters in such great detail. It was interesting to discover that the "villian" is really the victim! Very exciting! I would like to know more about the witch and her coven and if there was a connection between Lester and Imogene; other then being at the right place at the wrong time. Was this premeditated or happen stance? All in all: very good story👍👍👍"

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132

"I loved this BK Swain. Now I want more on the coven. Your plot twist, your style, or technical skill are far better than most best selling authors out there. You are truly gifted and I want to read everything you write."

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Tonystarkfan

"This book is amazing so far and I look forward to read it more "

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