What is your opinion?
Hilarious
"Very lighthearted for a war story. That part at the end about the mayor's wife really got me. I had to cover my mouth, because I burst out laughing. Finding out what "Falling at the Fountain" meant was also very funny, especially now that a bunch of the people in that village think adultery is okay. Great story, but I think you might want to edit some, just for technical stuff. There were quite a few spelling and grammar errors I caught along the way (and not the stuff you did on purpose for the accents either). This is very relateable to me, because I went to elementary and middle school at a private, christian school, whose principal was second-generation Italian. He taught our Bible class more often than not and used to tell us lots of stories like this. For example, his parents were the last in their neighborhood to buy a refrigerator, because "the world" owned refrigerators and not good christian folk. Thanks for a great read."