Portraits Of Forgotten Memory by Kaynat at Inkitt
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Portraits of forgotten memory

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Summary

Elina is an artist who draws portraits of strangers in the city square, but her talent hides a strange secret—whenever she sketches someone’s face, she is pulled into fragments of their hidden memories, witnessing emotions, pain, and moments no one is meant to see. She keeps this ability buried and lives quietly, avoiding questions about what she experiences. One day, a handsome stranger sits in front of her for a portrait, and the moment she starts drawing him, everything changes. Unlike before, the memories don’t feel чужe—they show her inside his past, in places she cannot remember, sharing moments she cannot explain. When she looks up, the boy denies ever knowing her, cold and distant, yet his eyes suggest otherwise, as if he remembers a truth he refuses to speak. Now Elina is left confused and shaken, because if they have never met before, then why does it feel like she has already lived in his memories?

Genre
Romance
Author
Kaynat
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
25
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Chapter 1: The Girl Who Draws Strangers

The city square was a restless, living entity. It breathed through the clatter of horse-drawn carts or the modern equivalent, the incessant, grinding hum of traffic and the overlapping shouts of vendors peddling everything from wilted jasmine to high-end electronics. It was a place of frantic intersections, where lives crossed for a split second before veering off into oblivion. Most people moved through the square with the tunnel vision of the hurried, their eyes fixed on their destinations, oblivious to the textures of the world around them.

Elina sat in her habitual spot near the basin of the central fountain, where the water tumbled in a rhythmic, soothing cascade that offered a small sanctuary from the chaos. A hand-painted wooden board leaned against the stone base: Portraits in Graphite – Capture a Moment.

She wasn’t looking for conversation, and she certainly wasn’t looking for fame. She was there for the geometry of the human face and the secrets hidden in the architecture of a frown or the lift of a brow. Her sketchbook, worn at the edges and thick with the layered graphite of a hundred ghosts, rested on her knees.

Most passersby didn’t stop. They viewed her with the mild, distant curiosity one reserves for a street performer or a stray dog. That was fine by her. The solitude allowed her to observe, to catalog the micro-expressions that made people human. She was a silent witness to a thousand passing stories, none of which she could truly claim as her own.

Then, a shadow fell across her sketchbook.

A man had stopped, standing just outside the threshold of her personal space. He was dressed in a charcoal coat that looked a size too heavy for the season, and he scanned the square with a jittery, disjointed motion, as if he were trying to memorize every exit point. He looked like a man who spent his life waiting for a door to be kicked in.

“So,” he said, his voice grating like dry leaves. “You draw people?”

Elina didn’t look up immediately. She was shading the hollow of a child’s cheek on the opposite page. Her pencil—an extension of her own nervous system—didn’t falter. “If they choose to sit,” she replied, her tone neutral, devoid of the usual sales pitch.

He hesitated, then slowly sank onto the small, collapsible stool she provided. He sat stiffly, his hands buried deep in his coat pockets. “How long does it take?”

“Depends on how much of you is hiding.”

He let out a short, hollow laugh that didn’t reach his eyes. “Then you might be here a while.”

Elina finally looked up. His face was a map of sharp angles and deep-set eyes, lined with a weariness that felt older than his years. She began to draw.

For the first few minutes, the ritual was blissfully mundane. The scratch of graphite against textured paper was the only anchor she needed. She captured the slope of his nose, the nervous twitch of his lower lip, the tension knotted at the bridge of his brow. It was mechanical; she had done this so many times her hand seemed to possess a consciousness of its own.

But then, the air in the square grew heavy.

It started as a dull, insistent pressure at the base of her skull—a familiar warning sign she had learned to treat as a migraine. She squinted, shaking her head slightly, trying to dispel the creeping numbness.

“Everything okay?” the man asked, his voice tighter now, betraying a sudden, keen observation.

“Yes,” Elina lied, her voice brittle. “Just stay still.”

But she couldn’t stay still, not on the inside. The world around her began to lose its edges. The raucous shouting of the fruit vendors, the splash of the fountain, the distant roar of engines—it all began to dissolve into a muddy, distant hum, as if she were plummeting into deep, murky water. The paper beneath her pencil didn’t feel like paper anymore. It felt cold, metallic, and slick.

The pressure inside her head spiked into a blinding, white-hot flare.

She wasn’t in the square.

The transition was violent, a sensory assault. The air was thick, choked with acrid, oily smoke that burned the back of her throat. The smell was distinctive—burning plastic and ozone. Alarms were wailing, a discordant, high-pitched screeching that vibrated in her very marrow, punctuated by the frantic, echoing shouts of people she couldn’t see.

She was standing in a facility, the architecture brutalist and utilitarian, now twisted into ruin. Fire roared from a ruptured pipeline, casting long, dancing shadows against the scorched concrete.

And there, ten feet away, was the man.

He wasn’t sitting on a stool. He was standing in the center of the inferno, his coat flapping in the superheated draft. He was frozen, a statue of pure, unadulterated terror. But beneath the fear, there was something else—a heavy, suffocating weight of guilt that looked like it could crush him where he stood.

Elina tried to scream, but the air she inhaled was nothing but smoke. She was a phantom, trapped inside a moment that had already burned itself into history.

Then, she saw her.

A girl, no older than ten, stood near a collapsing support beam. She was huddled, her hands pressed over her ears, her eyes wide and staring into the heart of the fire. The sight of her shattered something in Elina’s chest—a visceral, tearing pain that felt like she was remembering a loss she hadn’t yet experienced.

The ceiling buckled with a sound like a gunshot. Debris rained down. The man reached out, his hand outstretched, his fingers clawing at the empty, smoke-choked air toward the girl.

The man’s mouth opened, forming a name she couldn’t hear.

The roof collapsed.

Darkness surged in, total and absolute.

“Elina?”

She gasped, her body jolting so hard that her chair scraped violently against the stone floor. The square rushed back at her with the force of a tidal wave. Sunlight blinded her. The noise of the city—a symphony of honking horns and shouting vendors—returned with such suddenness that she clutched the table to keep from toppling over.

Her breath came in ragged, jagged stabs. Her fingers were white-knuckled around her pencil, which had snapped under the pressure.

The man across from her was halfway out of his seat, his face pale, his eyes darting toward the crowd as if he were expecting an ambush. “What was that? You… you just went blank. Your eyes…”

Elina stared at him, her vision swimming. She looked down at the sketchbook.

The portrait was finished. But it wasn’t the man sitting in front of her. It was the man from the fire. His expression was identical to the one she had just witnessed in that burning tomb. It was too accurate to be an accident, too raw to be a sketch. It was an interrogation.

“I…” She tried to speak, but her throat was locked. She felt like an intruder in her own skin. “I’m fine.”

The man didn’t look convinced. He glanced at the drawing, and his face went deathly still—a mask of absolute, frozen horror. He didn’t look at it like a portrait; he looked at it like a crime scene photo.

He stood up, his coat swirling around him. “If you’re done,” he said, his voice barely a tremor, “I should go.”

He didn’t wait for a response. He turned and plunged into the sea of pedestrians, his movements erratic and desperate. He looked like a man running from his own shadow.

Elina remained motionless. The square went on, oblivious to the earthquake that had just occurred in her mind. A street performer started playing a violin nearby, the tune cheerful and mocking.

She looked down at the sketch once more. Her thumb brushed the charcoal of his forehead, smearing the ink.

“I didn’t imagine that,” she whispered to the empty air, her voice trembling.

The realization sat in her stomach like a stone. She hadn’t drawn a stranger. She had drawn a memory that wasn’t hers, a tragedy that hadn’t finished unfolding, and a man who was clearly running from a past that was currently tearing its way into her present.

She looked up at the passersby, and for the first time in her life, the world didn’t look solid. The buildings seemed to sway, the people seemed like actors on a fraying stage, and the sky felt like a thin veil over a vast, dark abyss.

She wasn’t just a girl who drew portraits anymore. She was a vessel. And the world she had lived in—the safe, predictable world of pencils and fountain water—was starting to bleed.

Something had been broken in the silence, and she knew, with the terrifying certainty of a nightmare becoming real, that she was never going to be able to put it back together again.

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