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The Mafia King My Sister Threw Away

"An amazingly 👏🏽 well written, most enjoyable Mafia story. , Portraying just the necessary balance of forbidden attractions, betrayal, drama, danger, revenge, action, power play and spice .🔥 Making it the perfect 👌🏽 short story, minus the usual blood and gore often display in this genre.. What uniquely stood out for me was the method of revenge employed by the protagonists. It brought new mean to an old saying,. In this instance revenge turned out to be a dish best served HOT 🔥 🥵 as opposed to cold.🤣 This story is definitely worth the read ! So give it a try, you will not regret it. "

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Mafia

"I loved this wonderful short story. Never judge a story by its length. You won’t find any gore scenes, no blood and definitely no domestic violence. The sex scenes were measured; not excessive or overly exaggerated which suited me just fine. The plot and progression of the book were very well executed with no awkward transitions of chapters. The characters held together the story very convincingly and consistently. If you’re looking for something short and compelling this yours to go read. You won’t be disappointed. Thanks author for this lovely piece, it was different to what we usually find in the mafia genre 👏❤️🫶"

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