What is your opinion?
Interesting Beginning
"I thought this was an interesting and good beginning. I look forward to seeing where it goes. There are a few mistakes to be fixed. Remember to always start a sentence with a capital letter. All writers need to learn to edit their own work, reading your story aloud will help you find those pesky mistakes. All in all i think it is a good beginning that with a little polish will flow beautifully. Keep up the good work :-)"
An Interesting Start
"This book is in my reading list for years. I hope you are still around to see this. The first two chapters are really interesting for me. I wonder who this Daniel was and where they were going. I also liked the interaction between the sisters. The only thing you were lacking is the proper writing format and punctuation, especially for the first chapter. Anyway, if you read this, I hope you're still writing. Regards, Kei Angelus"
