Deserving of Great Praise

"I'm a big fan of the format of the book- the concept of incorporating poems and within the story and sectioning off periods of the story with each poem. It made it easier to read, and made the unimaginable easier to comprehend. What some people may skip over may be the most important part in this book, and the way you've written the story, readers are less likely to skip these alternate endings. These alternate endings very much intrigued me as well. In a way it creates a more personal, author reader relationship, while at the same time there is no way to know the level of sincerity. This is an epic, psychological book pertaining to the big questions of life, death, and love. It took about a week for me to read in its entirety. Aside from noticeable spelling and grammatical errors throughout the book, I believe this book deserves great praise."

A Refreshing Change

"It's a pleasure to read a book which tries to do something thoughtful and different. The use of lyrics / poems, the playscript format of some dialogue and the very effective use of present tense combine to create a book which demand and deserves more than a cursory read through. I wish the author every success with what is a very intriguing story. A careful edit to ensure tense consistency and to reduce the amount of exposition and 'tell' rather than 'show' would make it even better."

Amazing

"I love the detail in the book. It really helps a reader picture the character's surroundings. The plot is a really nice twist in my opinion. It plays on the idea that you have a soulmate and people are connected and I really like that concept. The only critic I have is that I wish there was a bit more dialog within the chapters. At the moments, it's really just the characters thoughts. Even if the character is talking to like a random person or a friend of theirs, it will help us as a reader know how the person acts with people and how their personality is. Overall, it's a really good read so far."

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This is horrible

"The cover and title are too boring for a romance. The blurb doesn't make sense. Starting a story with a poem is not good. The first couple of paragraphs in Chapter one were long and boring. The writing is bad and you can tell it is not edited. The sentences were too long and words were spelled wrong. The tenses were changed every other sentence. The author needs to work on this before publication. I could not get past the second paragraph in chapter one."