What is your opinion?
Target Aquired
" I enjoyed the characters and the plot development. "
Nrdd
"Great book Nice plot"
Target Acquired
"Really a very nice story...good to see the good side of law enforcement. Immensely liked the ending. Good job micaelodian. NM Keep the stories coming."
Target Acquired
"The story is interesting to read. "
Agent 24
"This book is amazing. For me I get bored fast but so far it has been a true adventure . I recommend this to any reader whom wants adventure and action "
Great descriptive writing
"This reminds me of a few different stories, I found it difficult to finish due to the fact the characters dialogue has no presence due to grammar. Proper dialogue has rules. If a character says something it's crucial to a good story, which this is, slightly unstructured, a few plot holes and little research was done to understand the psychology of hitmen but its a great trope to use. Example. "The grass is green." Agent 24 said elucidating the code word to her partner. "Making my move." Agent 48 replied ramming the bolt forward loading a .50 caliber round behind the firing pin. The descriptive nature of the dialogue sets the pace for the story and you do not have any representation of who is talking to whom and the descriptors to set a visualization for the reader. This fault takes away at least half of the story. Perhaps you are a young writer with no one to direct your talented skill, but I believe with a little bit of input this story could be written with proper structure and flourish. Good Luck Micaelodian! I hope you take the time to write this story properly, because it's a great start."
Target Acquired
"Very good plot and style of writing. Recommend it for all ages. Grammar correct and spelling was also. Thanks for a good book. "
Target Acquired
"It was a cool story."
Double cross
"For teenagers. "
Target Acquired Permission to Review?
"An interesting work certainly! Our agent navigates the Institution and co-workers, sneaks, shoots, and operates with fascinating insight. The perspective is successful! Looking from the authors selected point of view was not a mistake. The angle in which the audience can grasp the story is efficient. An odd start but a fine read."
