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Losing My Religion: Temptation Will Finish Them

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Summary

Losing my religion is about the abuse of power, love and disappointment ... but above all how people are neither bad nor good, it is decisions that determine our future. Father Miguel is a well-respected alcoholic priest in the parish but falls into the perverse temptation to get involved sexually with young people who trust him. Until Lola arrives a young woman who falls in love with Father Miguel and draws a Machiavellian plan to get him out of the way of the Lord where only the last circumstances force her to declare his intrepid love

Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Lie

INT. CHURCH. DAY

FATHER MIGUEL appears at dawn with a bottle in his hand, keeps it, arranges his hair. The faithful arrive.

FATHER MIGUEL

Let’s pray…

The ecclesiastical music begins. JONAH goes to communion. FATHER MICHAEL places his host in his mouth and leaves his fingers on his lips.

BLACK OUT

INT. CHURCH / CONFESSIONAL DAY

Jonah leaves the confessional very moved with his palms together.

Lola arrives. Jonah lowers his eyes and hastens his step.

LOLA

Father I have sinned from thought word work and omission.

FATHER MIGUEL

Let’s see daughter, tell me your sins.

Sounds Painted Black of the Rolling’s Stones

LOLA says his sins while FATHER MIGUEL gets excited and the member gets comfortable.

Turn down the music.

LOLA

And forgive me too for giving so much torment to you I’m sorry to make you go through all this father. I’m very sorry for that ...

FATHER MIGUEL

If you want to purify yourself, you must follow the Lord’s path. Who is God’s representative on earth?

LOLA

You?

FATHER MIGUEL

That’s right ... then your faith towards the Lord must be reflected in the full confidence you have for me and you will have me forever.

LOLA

Of course father. That’s right and it will.

FATHER MIGUEL

You can go in peace

LOLA

But father has not given me penance.

FATHER MIGUEL

I know, you must come today at midnight. Nobody should know. It is part of penance. Nobody should know ... Bring as much as you can of liquor.

LOLA

Any class?

FATHER MIGUEL

Yes, any but everything you can.

INT. CHURCH. NIGHT

LOLA arrives with a bag full of different bottles.

The father lets her get in.

FATHER MIGUEL

Did anyone see you?

LOLA

No father, nobody saw me

FATHER MIGUEL

Are you sure nobody saw you? Did anyone see you?

LOLA

No, of course not.

FATHER MIGUEL

Well ... Now turn around. Imagine that I’m not here. And I told you in detail what you have done, what is your worst sin. God give you light this and all the days of your life ... Tell me!

LOLA

I feel that I was born bad, I was born perverse ... and I feel I can not change it father ...

Acting with sad music telling how bad it feels.

Turn down the music.

LOLA

... Because, I ... I’ve been very bad ...

FATHER MIGUEL

There is nothing in the world that God cannot forgive you and remember that through me you will get the door to heaven. If you really want to get it you have to learn to follow instructions.

LOLA

I understand father and I am willing to fulfill all that is necessary.

FATHER MIGUEL

Continue ...

LOLA

I have thought and dreamed everything unimaginable so many times that I feel I have transformed in the devil himself.

FATHER MIGUEL

The best way to begin to eliminate all that evil you have inside is telling me.

LOLA

Well ... but I must confess that I do not know where to start.

FATHER MIGUEL

The first thing that brings you to mind is fine.

LOLA

Well, the first thing that comes to mind is my mind. I have dark thoughts ... I imagine it taking me complete ... touching me, kissing me.

FATHER MIGUEL

And who is that man.

LOLA turns and looks into the eyes of Father Miguel.

LOLA

That man is you.

FATHER MIGUEL

Continue ... Imagine that I am not ... that you are talking to God.

LOLA

I dream at night ... I open up, I touch ... you kiss me, you bathe me with the melted wax of the candles ... you spank me, you pull my hair ...

Music y Lola does an acting of lust.

Turn down the music

FATHER MIGUEL

Good start in this path of healing ... Now to purify yourself, you must do everything your imagination dictates to you until you are satisfied. Remember that all this is to be able to clean all the evil that you carry inside.

LOLA

But father, you do not deserve to receive all this crap.

FATHER MIGUEL

What corresponds to me, is to fulfill the highest responsibility that the Lord has given me to forgive you. Purify yourself of all this evil.

LOLA

Oh father you are so good, I feel protected and saved here with you.

FATHER MIGUEL

Now turn off the light.

Lust audio is heard.

FATHER MIGUEL

You must get dressed and leave soon, before dawn. And remember no one should see you or enter or leave here ...

The light turns on.

FATHER MIGUEL

Remember what I always tell you ... If they discover you, you will never be able to cleanse your sins and you will be dirty and cursed forever ...

LOLA

No father, do not tell me that, that gives me terror, I’ve always come with care, secretly because I want to be pure to be a good wife someday. I’m leaving, father. Give me the blessing.

FATHER MIGUEL

God accompany her on the path of light.

LOLA

Amen.

Lola leaves the church.

INT. CHURCH. NIGHT

LOLA

Father I am feeling better after so many years cleaning my spirit with you I feel cleaner and purer. In fact I have to confess a good news ... that I’m dating a guy ... he seems very good, he takes care of me and protects me, I feel as safe as I am with you. I think I’m healing my father, really thank you very much for your unconditional love and protection.

FATHER MIGUEL

You must make sure you are completely clean before falling in love.

LOLA

I think father I am already in love. They have hit me

FATHER MIGUEL

Then you should try not to become intimate until you are pure again.

LOLA

I will do so…

FATHER MIGUEL beckons her to sit down.

FATHER MIGUEL

What you think?

LOLA

Today father everything is more beautiful, clearer. I no longer have bad thoughts, I just want to go to the park with my beloved. spend my life with him, that’s just what I have in my head.

FATHER MIGUEL

You’re sick, you’re sick but do not you realize? That’s the way the devil is, he tricks you, and at the least moment thought ... pun! It will make you fall back into the trap. We must move forward and do all the necessary purifications to root out your sins.

LOLA

Of course, father, that’s what I love the most ...

FATHER MIGUEL

Turn off the light

They finish.

FATHER MIGUEL

God bless you, protect you and favor you.

LOLA

Amen

FATHER MIGUEL

Daughter...

LOLA

What’s going on?

FATHER MIGUEL

The panties ... And hurry that is dawning.

INT CHURCH NIGHT

LOLA

Father

FATHER MIGUEL

Tell me

LOLA

I want to get married

FATHER MIGUEL

Are you sure

LOLA

I’m in love ... well at least I think ...

FATHER MIGUEL

You are in serious trouble.

LOLA

You believe?

FATHER MIGUEL

I do not have the slightest doubt.

LOLA

Why does he say those things father? It is scaring me, and I do not want to retreat spiritually.

FATHER MIGUEL

Well, then you will have to go step by step and very carefully.

LOLA

I will do what father tells me.

FATHER MIGUEL

The first thing is to investigate everything you can about that man because to make such an important decision as to spend the rest of your life with him, you must first know who he is, where he comes from and especially what his intentions are for you. So from now on you have to inform me everything ... remember that I am God on earth and if you hide something, you will go back and burn in hell.

LOLA

Please, father, do not speak to me like that, I promise not to disappoint you.

FATHER MIGUEL

Do not promise anything, meet daughter, comply with facts ... the words are very distant from the facts.

LOLA

I will do it, I will not say more.

FATHER MIGUEL

Have you had impure thoughts?

LOLA

The truth is not my lord. If you have them, you will be the first to know.

FATHER MIGUEL

So ... go with God.

LOLA

Thank you father, thanks for all your advice.

INT. CHURCH. DAY

LOLA

Father let me introduce Jonah my companion.

FATHER MIGUEL

God bless you in the name of the Lord.

JONAH

An honor to meet you. Lola talks a lot about you. It has truly been a powerful light in your life.

FATHER MIGUEL

By God, I’m just a humble shepherd who guides a flock, nothing more ... And Your Jonah, who are you?

JONAH

Me? Well, I’m Jonah ...

FATHER MIGUEL

I did not ask your name, I asked you who you are ...

JONAH

I’m a good psychology student sir ...

FATHER MIGUEL

I did not ask you what you do ... only who you are.

JONAH

When you have the right answer, you will be the first to know.

FATHER MIGUEL

God be with you.

JONAH

Thanks, father.

LOLA

Goodbye father.

INT. CHURCH NIGHT

LOLA

I have to confess something important

FATHER MIGUEL

Let’s see tell me

LOLA

I do not know if I have forgiveness

FATHER MIGUEl

We have already spoken, there is nothing in the world that God can not forgive.

LOLA

And you father? Would you forgive me?

FATHER MIGUEL

What are you talking about?

LOLA

I have committed the worst fault and I have lost it ... I lost it forever ...

FATHER MIGUEL

My girl, how long have we known each other? I’m sure God will help us solve everything, I have no doubt about it. Tell me what happened.

LOLA

I had talked a lot about you. Sure without the details about what you already know. But yesterday we started to drink something and I felt a bit sentimental and I do not know exactly what I said. Then Jonah cavalierly took me to one of the rooms in the house and wrapped me up. When I woke up the next day ... He was not a father ... he abandoned me father ...

FATHER MIGUEL

But are you sure? Maybe he went to college, or had a commitment to fulfill.

LOLA

No father, he left me.

FATHER MIGUEL

When was the last time you saw him?

LOLA

Today, father ... he told me that if I did not tell him everything, Father would immediately end up with me ... and I did not know what to do ... he pushed me a lot, he was upset, he insisted, he asked me. I was very afraid like never before. I thought he would hit me.

FATHER MIGUEL

Did it hurt you?

LOLA

No, it was only his anger at what happened but he killed me every time I looked at him, the anger and hatred in his eyes was not normal.

FATHER MIGUEL

But ... What did you say that night?

LOLA

I do not know father, I do not know, I was drunk and I can not remember.

FATHER MIGUEL

Was there anyone else?

LOLA

We were in the house of a couple of our friends and they were like six people, I do not remember exactly.

FATHER MIGUEL

And you do not remember anything?

LOLA

I only remember that I woke naked in that bed. I do not even know how I got there.

FATHER MIGUEL

And what did Jonah say when you saw him?

LOLA

That she was dirty, and that she was not worthy of her love or her company ... And that there is no valid excuse in the world not to come and report her father.

FATHER MIGUEL

As you say? To report me? But what has been believed? and you…

What did you say? Answer me!

LOLA

Oh father, please beg me to forgive me, I implore you. Have mercy on me, I ask you, please.

FATHER MIGUEL

Stop bullshit and tell me what the fuck you said!

LOLA

Jonah told me that at the party I began to talk about a miserable part of my life.

That several years ago I began to feel hot and impure nightmares, and decided one day to come to you to heal me. And you cured me ... then they asked me very interested what it was that you had done. I told them it was a secret. All mocked incredulous and asked to tell them the truth. Then, according to Jonah, I began to tell you explicitly everything that you and I have done in all these years.

FATHER MIGUEL

Oh my God! And today, what did you say to Jonah? Did you tell him that all this was a lie because of your drunkenness? Answers!

LOLA

I told him I did not remember anything of what he had said that I felt very bad and stunned by all his hysteria but he insisted that I swear it was true.

FATHER MIGUEL

And what did you say? What did you say?

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