Inkitt
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inspiring

"this is the first story I've read on this site and i was really intrigued by the first few lines, so much so that I kept reading until the end. the way that you write I envy. I really want to be able to tell a story with as much emotion as you did. the way you described things in the protagonist's point of view made it really special, by the end, I was literally in tears. please keep writing I am definitely a fan!"

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