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Fantastic

"Though this is clearly only the beginning, this makes a great exposition that can only lead to a fantastic story overall. It’s what I would expect from someone with serious talent and creativity, and lots of personal experience with the ideas presented in the text. And yes, I mean that. "

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FINISH IT!

"I want to read more! I'm a band geek myself, so a story about fellow band geeks would be great. I love the characters and the premise. Just, please! Add more chapters! When will you come out with the next one? I'm like, begging you here."

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