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Failure

"As someone who has recently reread the Twilight Saga Books and rewatched the movies, I do feel that the author of Failure has proven themself to be a very avid Twilight Fan. Consistency with the story line is always important and that certainly happened here. Thank you for sharing this great story - I did enjoy this :)"

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Amazing!

"I really like this one! It’s iriginal, true to the real books and they way you capture my attention is just amazing! Kudos to you! Really! 🙏🏻"

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Enjoyable

"One of the best and most grammatically correct twilight fanfictions I've read! I would love to hear about her meeting the volturi though - sequel please?"

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failure

"OMG!!!! THIS STORY WAS BEYOND A M A Z I N G !!!!!! I FELL IN LOVE WITH ALL OF IT!! I DINT WANT IT TO END!!!! YOU ARE TRULY A FAN AS WELL AS I BC ONLY A TRUE FAN COULD CAPTURE THE ESSENCE OF THESE CHARACTERS AS THEIR CREATOR MISS MEYERS! GOD BLESS U AND THANK U FOR SUCH A GREAT STORY."

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Amazing!!!

"There’s just something about the book that I absolutely fell in love with I love how it’s written and I feel like every word I read I wanna read more and most definitely would like to recommend this book to my entire family and friends I give this 10 out of 10 and I’m absolutely in love ,never stop writing !"

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Love it

"Wish that they had different peoples view but still love it"

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Great!!

"I love the perspective of Edward and how innocent he seems and the wall that he doesnt put up like in the twilight books. I also lovee the way they changed bella right away."

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nice..

"it was really very nice to see twilight through that perspective....I really liked it n I hope others would too. though we definitely cant compare it to Stephanie's midnight sun but u really described Edward's perspective well... Anyone who wants to get to know our Edward and Bella's story through another pov should read it.."

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