What is your opinion?
Wow!
" Amazing and unique novel concept; I am so impressed by this book! Some books I have trouble getting into however I immediately found myself immersed in this story. I find all the characters relatable, especially Luna. I love how the characters unfold throughout the book and I get excited when learning something new about them. The pace of the book feels right and kept me interested without feeling rushed or trailing off. This review request popped up with still having a few chapters remaining to read so I cannot wait to finish (hopefully tonight!!)."
Great Potential
"Throughout my life, I have read many books. Believe me when I say that this is one of the best books that I have ever read. I did find a few punctuation and grammar mistakes, although they are scarce and are nothing major. Try letting the book sit for a few weeks before you go back and edit it; it works wonders for me. Another thing I thought that you could improve on is fine-tuning the character's emotions. Personally, I didn't feel much sympathy for the characters, especially when they experience life-changing events, like when Josh gets herded into the snowy tundra or when Luna shows Josh her tattoos. Change these, and there is nothing to criticize about your book. I've been on Inkitt for a few months, and this is the best review I have given anyone. I am expecting to see this book in a bookstore someday. Keep writing! -Ellie"
Amazing book!
"I was enthralled from the first word to the last! I expected to read to fall asleep and ended up reading through the night and it was so worth the missed sleep. Perfect blend of genres from adventure to thriller to romance to humor. I think if u like immortal instruments, beautiful creatures, the circle, the magicians, or even Harry Potter etc. type books you will love this! I'm only upset there isn't a whole series to dive into YET lol. Thank you for the great book and great editing/proofreading! I didn't see or notice any distracting errors making it easy to become engulfed in this magical world."
Awesome!!
"Honestly, I want to write a huge spoiler-y review spilling all the beans cause this story IS THAT AWESOME!! It's one of those stories you wish to have long debates with your friends over a burger and guess what? THERE'S MORE TO COME !! The writer has created really well-structured characters whose personalities can easily be defined by their dialogues. I mean come on, this story is about GLYPHS!! And if that hasn't got you interested yet then the writer's intriguing writing style definitely will! Overall this story is like a black hole that sucks you into it and shows you mysterious wonders that you witness once you enter the heart of this story. Happy reading to you all!"
OFF TO A GREAT START
"Just started reading the story and I'm finding it very interesting. I couldn't help but give it a thumbs up."
Really good story, very original concept
"I enjoyed this story. Though it seemed like the children’s behavior seemed more mature than their ages. But in all fairness the author did point out that the heroine was very smart for his age. I found it interesting that the author did a sort of backstory data dump for each of the characters. Giving a backstory a chapter for each child. normally this is discouraged for most novel structures, In favor of a more interwoven approach but somehow it works here. Looking forward to the next episode. "
A nice, original book
"This book is great. However, there are a few continuity errors with the ages of the characters and timeframes of the plot. Besides that and a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, this book is incredible. It has an original plot line. There are some parts that could have much more detail, but still don’t ruin the book. I hope to see a sequel soon."
