What is your opinion?
Review
"This was a good read"
Bite
"I love how different the plot is from other books!"
Nice plot
"I really liked the plot of the book , its entertaining. The way the story is brought out is good but you just need to work on the paragraphing and spacing. Other than that, i can not wait for the updates and a complete piece"
Good Story
"I'm going to start my review with a disclaimer. I haven't read to the newest chapter, but from what I've read up to this point, I can see the potential in this story. My biggest critique about this story is the s p a c i n g. It is so important to have paragraphs and separate lines for dialogue and not just one huge paragraph for the entire chapter. Please author, it would make this story so much easier and its an easy fix. Other than that, I like the plot so far and I'm interested to see where this story goes. Good job Author!"
