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Shadows

"I completely enjoyed the plot, and it was well written too. There were no distractions, and the next was smoothly prepared for. Fantastic. "

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Excellent story!

"Impossible to stop reading this. Each chapter left you hanging off the edge of your seat wanting to know more and what happened next. Please let there be a second book soon!"

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Shadow! Amazing.

"One of the best books I’ve read in quite a while. It was interesting and well written, and you did a wonderful job at describing everything without drolling on. "

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Difficult to believe this wasn’t printed!

"I really enjoyed Robert’s character. The storyline was original, the writing style light and entertaining. I liked all the little footnotes though it’s a shame you have to wait until the end of the chapter to read them. I did find the villains were a tad cliché and their dialogue always seemed rushed and forced (ie falling into the trap of explaining your evil plans to the protagonists). I would never have guessed reading this that this was an amateur’s first novel. I’m really looking forward to the next one! I hope that the next book will include more backstory to the Olossa and the rules and methods of their magic. I hope Robert’s power will also become useful again. "

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