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Wow

"He should have been a bit more observant. Or gone back to verify things at to satisfy his mind"

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Danielle

"Love it! Xxx"

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Best Online Story I’ve ever read

"It’s perfect. I just think more details about the research should suffice."

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Amazing

"Well written and thought out. The overall story is captivating and I like that she has laid out other characters. I actually came across the “part of your world” book so seeing how the characters met in this book is fun. Definitely recommend this and others books by this author. "

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Highly recommend

"Definitely my favourite book to read recently. Really enjoyed this story."

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Love it

"I loved this book so much. It is definitely one of the best love stories on here! "

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one of the best mafia story ever read

"I have read my fair share of Mafia romans. This is for sure one of the better one. Characters are colorful and well developed. Often the main character is just cold and cruel, but the main here is written so well, you can’t hate him!"

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The great wide somewhere

"Great story can’t wait to read more of your work!"

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Wonderful...amazing story

"Really wonderful...love your writing style,. Full of suspense and I'm hooked instantly...thank you so much"

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Very interesting and very touching and very romantic

"It so interesting, full of love scenes and sex scenes.. very romantic. Nick and Ellie really love each other , I love thier romantic live. I am so happy that Ellie was able to go to Havard university eventually."

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The great wide somewhere

"Love love but there needs to be more "

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Fuck yes!!!!!

"Such an amazing beautiful ass story!!!!!"

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Must-Read

"Captivating book from cover to cover! I honestly could not wait for each update, but it was well worth it. Loved it!"

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Idk

"I liked the whole book"

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The Great Wide Somewhere

"This story is so great! It’s very different from all the other stories I’ve read here. What a beautiful writing!!"

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One to read ❤️❤️

"When I started Reading this story, there was no going back. I was pulled in and I fell for all of the characters. This is one hell of a love story. To be honest I am kinda sad it ended. I even hated that I had to put it down so I could sleep. Thank your for this amazing story. I am gonna save it so I can come back to reread it 😉🙏🏻❤️"

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Best story

"It is a amazing story . It's a perfect story to all aspects. Awsome plot. All character are awsome .this story is special for me because it's a first time I read that a Male character is telling the story not a female like in most books and I love it . It was a different experience for me and in journey of this book I totally enjoyed each second of my time so lots of thanks and love for the writer and hope in future I could get a chance to read more of ur books because you are awsome writer may Allah keep u safe and happy. "

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Suspenseful

"Absolutely loved this story! What an amazing ending too! I am sad to have it be finished but with what a great and suspenful story! Such a great read! "

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Adorable piece .. i enjoyed it big time ..

"acton is very alive..romance is very tender and heart touching .. the sequenced events are very smooth and interesting .. "

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Aaahhh! Thank you

"Intriguing whirlwind of a time with monstrous acts against an innocent and the outcome turns into a wonderful love story, thanks for the read"

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