the crash
Well the plain is here to bring me to new York.
I got on the plain then got in to my chair, I was feeling fine nothing wrong with me. The plane started to move and we got the runway then we took off. Now I was sitting right next to someone with a hooded jacket he looked strange but I didn’t think much of it, so I just looked away and looked outside.
“Sir let me take your bags please.”
I heard a woman talking so I turned and saw that she was talking. She was looking at me.
“Oh sorry I forgot I still had my bags here you go.”
“Thank you.”
I hand her my bags and she put them in the storage above the stranger. I don’t know why but every time I looked at him I would start to feel weird, so I tried to ignore that weird feeling and gained enough courage to talk to the mysterious person.
“Hello, how are you.”
They didn’t say anything, that is weird why didn’t he say anything, oh well I guess I’ll just go to sleep. Moments later I wake up to the window seeing many lights I was finally in new York. I looked at the mystery person and when I did I saw that he had his hood up and he had a mask on then I looked down I saw something in his hand it looked like a weapon I started to get hot and start sweating. He turns around and looks at me.
“What scared, you should be.”
He got up and fired into the air everyone heard the gun shot and got scared of him then everyone started to whimper. I then saw others get up and join him but they didn’t shoot anyone instead they started to talk to each other then two of them went to the cockpit when they got in there the door closed and all you could hear are two gunshots. Mean while they’re were two other people watching over everyone. A man got up and shot one of the men in the shoulder. The man yelped and shot him in the head the mans body dropped. Then one of the men went his body and searched him, he pulled out a police officers badge.
“This is what happens when you try to be a hero!”
Everyone started to cry and I started to freak out they’re was even baby’s crying. Everyone was scared I was scared. I looked outside the window we were about to run into two buildings. as soon as we hit the two buildings they’re was a explosion. My eyes were cl0sed. I opened my eyes and noticed that I was alive but I start to look around and noticed that they’re was no one crying nor whimpering but mostly no one was breathing even the shooters weren’t breathing. I start to get up from my seat, when I started to move I start to feel pain in my right shoulder. I looked at my shoulder and saw glass in my shoulder. I attempt to pull it out and I successfully pull it out. I started to look for an exit I looked up and saw a hole in the roof I went to jump to it and successfully made it.
When I got up on the plane I saw police surround the area. Everyone looked at me and the police told me to get down from the plane, then the paramedics came brought me back to the ambulance and started to fix my wound.
That day happened on nine eleven. Ever sense that day I never got on a plane but I know I survived nine eleven.









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you messed up in the sentence my eyes are closed
also nice writing