What is your opinion?
One of the best things I have ever read
"This might be one of the best things I have ever read. I am little sad that Tobias left us, but I do love that you incorporated characters from other series with the same personalities that they had in their original series. Divergent and The Hunger Games are my two favorite book series, and I love that you put them together, although it would have been interesting if Tris had grown up in the faction system and moved to Panem. This fan fiction is not ordinary, and really grabs your attention. This is probably one of the best things I have ever read."
A Dystopian Duo: Retribution's Bold Crossover and Constructive Critique
"The story earns a strong 4.0 out of 5 because it is a highly entertaining, creative, and well-executed crossover that thoroughly delivers on its fantastic premise. The high rating celebrates the successful adaptation of two iconic characters into a compelling new narrative. The final star is withheld due to the minor structural and contextual challenges inherent in any ambitious crossover, specifically the heavy reliance on external canon knowledge and the occasional dips in pacing. Addressing the constructive feedback points would likely push this well-crafted fanfiction into the realm of a flawless, five-star read."
Really Interesting
"Your story is very good ! There are a few things that you could fix though. One is before you post a story, make sure to check your spelling and grammar. The story line kind a followed Catching Fire, but otherwise this is a great story! Keep writing! You are amazing at it!!"
