Inkitt
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Excellent Story

"A very good read. Adventurous and quite gripping."

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Brenda

"Fantastic. Thoroughly enjoying it. Just a few grammatical errors but what a wonderful use of imagination. Hoping they get some adult help soon because the Taints are getting stronger. So thankful to Phantom for guiding them. Waiting for the next update. "

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Love it!

"The book is not finished yet, but it's good. Consistent updates. Original plot. Great grammar which is rare. An overall intriguing story that is definitely worth reading."

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Legacy of the Solar Order I

"This is an amazing book. It has very few grammar mistakes. It keeps you guessing what's gonna happen and how is this connected to this and the suspense is great. If you haven't read the book and you're reading this review, you should definitely read it!! Again, amazing book and @jalleynwinchester you are a very talented writer. Never give up"

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Came back

"So I keep coming back to this story. I do not know why. You did this to me. It's a good thing though,"

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You know who I am. Lol

"Love it. Eagerly waiting for more. The only issue is sometimes I have to re-read parts because it is hard to comprehend. "

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Legacy of the Solar order

"Good story, but kind of drug out"

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Stuff of High Fantasy Epics

"Holy moley, serious effort went into this novel. I was super impressed with the author’s technical writing and style. My one main hang up is that this was so fast paced and could definitely be lengthened into a trilogy. But if you like ride by the seat of your pants, this is for you! "

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Enjoying

"You are very descriptive which is a good thing. Very well organized as well and very punctual.. When the young boy came up and offered to move the guy out of the crowd just trying to avoid the crowd to get to him I cannot blame the guy if it was me Id probably pass out too lol"

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