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Emotional

"I love Opal, and Koa so much...I'm happy that the darkness has ended for them, and they are able to be happy together. 🥰🥰🥰This book took me through so many negative emotions, because of the abuse they went through, but they survived together, and it's a beautiful thing. "

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Good one to read

"This story is really good.. keep up the good work..."

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Penny brewer

"Nice story even though it got a little sideways every now and then"

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Good

"I liked the part where Opal and Koa fall in love with each other I disliked the part where we just find out that Koa had a bad childhood,we don't have the exact info "

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Lovely Fellow

"This was a beautiful story. I loved the ups and downs and it made me cry. I love books that make me emotional. I would definitely read this again."

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Lovely Fellow

"Oommgg!! 100% recommend reading. Best story ever!"

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Rage against the dying of light

"Really good novel "

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I like this story a lot.

"I just like it over all, And the female lead is so kind. I want to be able to help and make everyone around me happy, but I can't well not always but I'm trying. I like this story a lot. Thanks author ☺️."

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Opal

"The writer doesn’t really bring out the emotions,feelings "

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Lovely Fellow

"Wow! Really! I got so into this story and then it ends like this! Please tell me that there is a sequel 😩"

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Favourite book on Inkity so far

"Opal and Koas romance is so cute i even stayed up reading the book😉💓"

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Sooo gooddd

"It’s sooo good but I am mad at koa rn😗"

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Not So Typical

"This is not a genre I typically read. But this story is very good. Well written, interesting characters, and lots of detail. Very good! "

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Lovely

"Such a sweet angsty story. I love the writing and how detailed the story is. The interactions between the characters are so good. "

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Good.

"Good story, I like it."

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Lovely Fellow

"Really well written. The author really knows how to make you feel the characters pain and emotions. Recommend 👍🏾"

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Lovely Fellow

"I love how positive this book is. The characters and their personality are constantly performed well and I think that they're really crafted well. The story is also very good. "

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Lovely fellow

"wish this story was actually finished it said complete but nowhere near it"

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Lovely Fellow

"This book was written well, and the plot was amazing. I cried several times reading, but it really felt like the author put their heart into the writing and as a reader, I felt that. I would most definitely recommend to my friends. I usually don’t read sad or angst filled stories or books, but this was so beautifully written, and I’m so glad I took a chance on reading it! "

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The story is surprising, sad, heartbreaking and intriguing

"I like opal’s personality and who she is as a person she’s gonna be the one to break koa walls and catch when he falls. Bring to life and stop him from drowning."

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