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Little red

"Awesome thanks "

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Intriguing

"I was actually looking for something else but it kept me in. So now I want to finish reading it"

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Hooked!

"I am impressed with the way the author made Werewolf writing her own. I was hooked and I can't wait to read more. There are some spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors but they are not extensive. Continue writing! I look forward to reading more.! Good luck!"

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red riding hood 2.0

"i like it do far"

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A different kind of fairy tale

"First of all, I like that you use Little Red Riding Hood as a starting point in your story. It's always interesting, yet also difficult, to turn such a well-known tale into something new - so I'm very curious how you will handle this challenge :-) So far, I like your writing style: you can easily follow the points of view and the plotline in general. I love how you included the dream sequence - very mysteriously. And, you certainly take your time moving the story forward - thank you, it adds suspense :-) So, Iet's see wha's up with her grandmother, and of course, the strange man she met in the forest. Beside some typos, I think this could be a good story - so I will follow :-)"

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