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Relatable and nice

"You wrote nice ✨. The way you express it makes me feel that It is reality. It shows the pain that some people go through. I wish you would make more like these."

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I want more...

"I really feel the emotional pain of the protagonist, it's so well written and i really do want to continue reading this, but sadly there are no more chapters... pls update... you can't leave me hanging like this!! but overall i love this and can't wait for more!"

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Wow

"You truly feel the pain the protagonist is going through, your writing translate her fear very well. These short poem-like chapters make you sympathize and more importantly it makes you feel. Truly curious to see where this leads. "

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