Inkitt
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Loved it!

"your writing style is the best I love the thought of this story."

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One od the best ive read

"The story was great and so was the plot keep up the good work "

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Great! Just a few pointers...

"Hi Ms. ViolentGodess! I loved your story, great plot and Jeff seem exactly like he is from the stories. The only pointer I have is that towards the end, the grammar began to slip a little. Great job though!"

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