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Great Plot

"This action/adventure story is great!!!! There's a lot of action with our two M.C's and of course government wanting to get their expierements back in one piece and there's the questions of morality and ethics that will get you thinking about our own furry pets. "

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Thoroughly engaging

"Thoroughly engaging, from the first word to the last. I couldn't stop reading. It presents an amazing amount of detail without slowing the story down. Good writing skill. This is a rare story that falls closely to the realm that interests me. The hastiness and magnitude of the violence following the lead character seems to stretch believability at times, but perhaps the reasons will become clearer in the second part (which I haven't read yet.) There are a small number of typos and grammatical errors, but it's generally better than most of what I read with regard to technical errors."

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Bitch: Transformation

"I highly recommend this Sci-Fi story. I loved it and I'm looking forward to Book 2 & 3. This story was well written and very engaging. "

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Amazing

"Cant wait to read "

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Ingesting

"So far it seems odd type of story. Basically a lot of escaping with no real plans. "

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Amazing

"It takes a very skilled writer to spin such a fantastic story. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Bitch: Transformation

"A must read, very different. "

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Quick paced action

"Such a great story. At first I was a bit confused but the story didn’t let up its quick pace. There was so much happening that I couldn’t put it down."

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Unique and exciting

"This book is interesting and unique. I am looking forward to the next one and seeing more of the adventures of the main characters. "

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Good work, can't wait till next book

"It's fast paced, and the chapters are very short, but at the same time that immerses the reader by making them feel like they're hurtling between the obstacles in their journey as the characters are. This isn't what I was expecting when I chose to read it, I was expecting it to be a metaphor. But the plot (so far) is good and pulls the reader in and makes them want to find out more. It also strikes a good balance between the characters having too hard a time or a too easy/choreographed time of it. Not sure who I'd recommend to, I guess people who like action packed and/or mystery plotlines."

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Bitch: Transformation

"Well I was really confused at first. But it got better towards the end. Just hope the story continues."

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Transformation

"I really enjoyed this book, but I didn't like the ending. It ended to soon so I'm assuming there is going to be a sequel. But the wait is going to be frustrating. Great job author!"

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I love it so far

"I love the story so far. Can't wait for the rest of the book. I would recommend this story to my friends and family."

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Bitch

"Iiikll,mmnnn"

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Bitch yransformation

"Absolutely love this it's different and original I will definitely read this authors future work loved it "

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Uniquely written

"For some readers it seemed hard for them to keep up, the main character was confusing at first, she hadn't realized she was a dog, so her story didn't relay as a dog, but as a girl that ahh... was extra beastial. Some of your work is funny, Alex James instead of Alex Jones. That had me laughing for a second. The hells angels tho.... they're not good people, I would have chosen a different MC, but for the area ypu covered I see why you didn't. Over all a few rough spots that didn't read smoothly, but worth the patience if a reader can wade through them and keep it turning. Good book overall, now I hope you find her name sometime. As well as what happened to Alan, you hint at his death, but we figured out last time that he's tricky... so...."

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Very interesting!

"Bitch: Transformation is a very interesting read. It’s very short and action packed for the most part. There’s still a lot of the story that I don’t understand, but I’m hoping there will be a follow up to fill in the gaps and missing pieces. The writing style is very different in a good way. It was super different than anything I’ve read before. Nothing is handed to you and I enjoyed that aspect. "

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