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Jensen

"I, usually, steer clear of mafia stories; but, this one had a nice turn around for an unexpected romance. "

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❤️ 😍 such a moving read!!

"To author 😍: such details, challenges, struggles, friction, chemistry, Jensen's POV, range of emotions, drama, constantly changing twists made for a strong can't-put-down book. What a roller coaster journey for both Lynn & Jensen. I'm glad in the end they became a permanent couple 💑 & now a family with their son. The flash backs, the dreams that mostly acted like premonitions/visions & the history given added depth to the storyline. This was a really good book I couldn't put down, I had to finish reading to find out what happened next. Being a part of a gang or mafia life is never easy I'm sure. Always, have to be on top of your game, business, security & your competition in other gangs. Hopefully Jensen & Lynn will be strong enough to handle all that comes their way. Great book...good imagination. Thank you for sharing your talent & book with us readers 😍!!! "

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Brilliant

"Brilliant,im a sucker for an epilogue and there isn't one, but loved it all the same "

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Jessica

"Great entertainment!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗"

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Jensen

"I loved everything about this book from the beginning to the end it was very well put together this was actually very beautiful there was Happy times bad times dumb times it was all in one organization that was very beautiful The Good bad and The ugly wonderful job to the author thank you for sharing your book and all the time you took thank you"

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Jensen

"Excellent In every way. I couldn’t stop reading. "

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Amazing and mysterious!!

"Great story with great outline,loving the suspense. And how it leads the rest of the story on. "

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Jensen

"Nicely done, the story , plot everything is good "

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Jensen

"Really enjoyed this story! I love happy endings!"

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Love it

"Loved your book, the plot was great ❤️"

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Jenson

"I really enjoyed this book."

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Nice

"This book is AMAZING! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Lynn

"Great book"

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Good

"Best novel really"

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Jensen

"The book is interesting. The plot has been well written and thrilling. I would recommend the book to friends."

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Jensen

"One of the best stories l have ever read.The plot was simple yet beautifully elaborated.Thank you dear writer for this wonderful story about how love can conquer all.😘😘"

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Nice

"Just a lovely story. You have to read this book 📖💯👍"

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Badass but sweet.

"I think this book is very underrated since it only has 6 reviews so far. It was very entertaining and I couldn't put it down. Well done. I would definitely read more books from this author. "

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Awesome

"Beautiful story "

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Fantastic

"Loved it! Brilliant storyline and characters couldn’t stop reading it. Amazing well done 👍 "

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