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I was surprised...

"I was more surprised with the length of the chapters, I always appreciate that. I was glad to see an intricate plot that had more twists and turns. Grammar and punctuation were near perfect. Excellent work overall, will continue reading. "

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wonderful

"great story telling can't wait for the other part kept me on my toes with the plot the description of all the creatures are incredibly easy to see love this book and looking forward to the rest of the story "

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