Inkitt
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"Full of great moments. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Story

"Slow at times, but good story "

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Gangster daughter returns

"Love the 2nd book"

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A life to come back to

"wow u are an awesome writer thank u"

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Mafa

"Lpve it i need to read it more its very good i wish i could read more stories"

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A life I left behind

"Several mistakes in using correct grammer. "

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A life to come back too

"Loved it so far please update "

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Strange

"These three year olds are super children with what they are capable of doing at their age..... It made me feel like Huh the whole read"

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Really good

"I like the plot, it goes a little quick some of the time, and there was a lot of grammar mistakes. I think if you took a little more time with this, it would improve drastically, and maybe write down the other ideas so you don't forget. I really like it though, and I think you did really well. Can't wait for the next one. Good luck!"

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Amazing

"The writer has shown a great use of her plot writing skills. The story and its endless twists and very intriguing and it will not let you leave in the midway. I will surely suggest this story for romance lovers. At some points it felt like the sentences are a little grammatically wrong, but I still consider this an amazing read."

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A life to come back too

"This 2nd book is not as awesome as the first. Had a few mistakes. Hope the 3rd will be better. But overall it was good."

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Great

"Loving this! I hope her and Ryder get together again!! "

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