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Hidden in the crevices of time
"I enjoyed the way this story slowly reveals itself instead of giving answers too quickly. The idea of fragmented memories and unexplained flashbacks made it easy to keep turning pages because you genuinely want to understand what happened. The mystery element stayed interesting throughout and the emotional side gave the story more depth than I expected."
Nice plot
"I love how you began this story with a hint of mystery and built on it as the story unraveled nicely done! Watch for those grammar mistakes though as they do appear in areas throughout the story."
Hidden in the Crevices of Time
"From the storyteller starts with an ordinary young woman, living a modern life in a Malaysian community that is simple and well organised. The story plot moves as the present gets a window of the past. The heroine has no recollection of the car accident, she accepts flashbacks as headaches that worries her. The mother connects her to her past, her childhood, when she was involved in an accident. She is traumatised and perplexed. The story moves further with the input of her neighbour who is a kind nurse who empathises with her. The story takes a new dimension with an attempt to analyse the mind which is a unique technique of the writer. The story is intriguing as it moves from the present to the past; the reader is kept interested as it gives certain imprinted memories of the sub conscious that affect lives. A good story with a turning point to explain events of heroine's predicament. All characters are believable and portrays towards the development of situation they are in. The writer gives her characters personality, emotions and we get a good perspective of the whole story.."
