What is your opinion?
Beautiful!!!
"I absolutely love poems, and this book has some amazing ones! The pace, the flow and the way the sentences are said and structured are mesmerising and so telling, each poem tells a separate story, and each really touched your heart! Your writing is so elegant and just-ahh!!! Can't wait to read more from you!! Much love, Coffee :)"
lovely work
"I think poetry is incredibly brave - I'm wordy and long-winded and I can't imagine having the confidence to allow a handful of chosen words express something important to me. Lee A. does this beautifully. Lee, I hope you stick to your guns and punctuate this work, capitalize these words the way you see fit. I'm always happy to proofread and offer that as feedback but not when it comes to poetry: This is the place where the rules of prose don't belong, these are dreams you're sharing and I love how your title often reads as the very first line of the poem (to me). Keep it up, keep it up!"
Deserves more recognition.
"I don’t usually read poems, but as I progress with every word, I feel the words speak out to me. This is a poem that showcases a lot of the author through the word expressed. You did a wonderful job phrasing the words in a way that calls out as if it has a voice of its own."
It's beautiful
"It's beautifully written. Written of every little feelings that a person feel while they are in Love. Or of dream or any other human emotions. Loved it"
Absolutely mesmerising
"A beautiful beautiful work. The words each express a story of their own. The poet has given a lot of thought in their work to make them make sense and express. It has been nicely penned too. All the poems express a deep emotion and leaves you with a million thoughts racing through your mind. Also, the language is just apt! It's neither too simple, nor too flowery, which makes it easy to read and understand ad enhances it's beauty. Although, I do have somethings to point out. The poet uses free verse a lot. So, it's my personal suggestion that they should try writing in other rhyming schemes too. Other than that, I think they should also try to use more poetic devices and not just enjambment. Apart from that, they could also try to arrange certain words, so that they make more impact and try to improve the punctuation too. Apart from it, I just have three other words to say: I loved it!"
