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VJohnny Uedited

"Wow Wow Wow what a great book Thank You it should be made into a TV series it would be too long for a movie +-4 hours Lil hope there will be a follow up book"

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Brilliant - Hope there will be a sequel!

"You are an absolutely brilliant writer. I have written down all the songs, looking forward to the discoveries! Also looking forward to your future works. "

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Love the novel

"Love the novel, intriguing, twist and turns. "

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OMG what a Ride!

"Okay, so it is hard to believe this is the Author's first story, its so amazing! Yes, it is rough with grammar and punctuation, but the Author is upfront about it being a concept and draft all rolled into one. Apparently written chapter by chapter as the inspiration hit. And boy does it HIT! The plot, the characters, the descriptions. I mean, OMG! I got tingles and goose bumps. I shall forevermore be cautious of men with names beginning with 'J', just saying. If you feel like a real adventure, I HIGHLY recommend this dark thriller. You will need your big girl or boy pants on to read this one, so no youngsters. A definite must-read. I will be re-reading this one once it's been edited. Thank-you Author."

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In love!

"I am in love with this book!"

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Jordan, Rose

"Keeps the reader at edge"

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First book? WOW

"You are an amazing writer. The story was a work of art. I loved/hated every minute of it. Each page kept me wanting more. The need to know what was going to happen next to sweet innocent Rose. I love the way you built the characters and depth in which you described the scenes leaving no doubt as to what was going on. You could almost smell the blood and fear. I was surprised to hear that this was your first story as it is so well written. I will not say anything about the grammar etc errors as you clearly stated that this is a rough draft. Thank you ever so much for sharing this night mare. I will as I stated before reread it since it is now complete. I loved it from start to finish, even though I would have loved for her and Jonathan to have been together at the end it was still a fitting ending. Once again thank you. A MUST READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Jonny

"Great work! I loved reading this book and always looked forward to updates. I hope that you write a sequel!"

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When will the next book come out please

"When wil the next book done please "

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Great book

"This book is great!!!! What happens next? Left me hanging I need to know more."

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Very tense and intriguing

"It keeps you wondering, has little surprises you don't expect, characters are likable and it's not something you come across every day. "

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Overall very good... a few notes:

"This plot is definitely one that keeps you hooked and I can't wait for the next chapters. That being said I do feel like maybe the grammar and punctuation could use a little touch-up. The story is great overall but I feel like grammatical errors can sort of take away from the reading experience and make certain things difficult to understand. Definitely a very interesting and well-thought-out plot though, and I can't wait to keep reading. Keep up the good work!"

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Save me

"I liked the details Didnt like no details "

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