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The kidnapped

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Summary

A girl is kidnapped and being held captive in this luxurious mansion and her boyfriend owes the boss money

Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Guns fire rapidly behind me as I run but I certainly don’t look back.

The man that kidnapped yells “I’ll find you Melanie”

yes that’s me Melanie Blance and I’m starving so I stop at a diner to see if they have any leftovers because the rascals took my purse with my card but I barely had anything in it anyway since I’m only 22.

My short brown hair is a mess and I want to go home and for one thing I’m not sure how I got into this mess as I haven’t done anything bad unless uh maybe I didn’t pay my taxes.

That’s probably not it hopefully. The lady at the counter doesn’t speak English so someone comes over and says something to the lady

“She says she has some leftovers she’ll give to you free, you look really hungry” “I am after being knocked out.” Then he started speaking in a different language. I wondered last week I was on holidays and today I’m running away from kidnappers my life will never be the same again. She gave me the leftover food and I walked out. The man that I was just talking to was now acting strange. I was thinking did he like me or was he one of them the kidnappers.

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