A Great Start

"Reminds me of the days of Apartheid in South Africa. White people were forced to stay away from black people. They were untouchable. They had there own spaces. Separate toilets, Seperate shops. Had to have a pass to be in the city at night. White people frowned upon them yet they used them as labour. It was a time of terror. We should always be reminded, through writing like your piece, that we might never forget, and although apartheid exists in some countries like Israel, mankind still does not learn to peacefully live together and move on to greater things. I enjoyed the interaction between the children, and mommie's words struck a cord deep down. Well done. "