Inkitt
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Amazing

"Although there are misspelled words. I have to say this story is amazing. I’m absolutely drawn in. Read both books back to back"

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The Trinity

"I enjoyed both of these books,but there is no ending. Please continue with this story so I can recommend it to everyone. Thank you! "

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Enthralled

"I find myself craving more and more of the story"

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Bladewarriirs II

"Need to correct much grammatical errors. Hard for me to put the book down, though."

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Second Book! Yeah!

"I loved the start of the first (though not finished yet), but now reading this I can't believe Jackson's dead!!! Will have to catch up on my reading ASAP! You have a great mind and imagination to have come so far! Having read your very first chapter as it was written at the very beginning, I'm blessed to have seen you rise from the ashes and have come so far, You definitely found your own style and I can see you working to perfect it as what perfection means to you alone! Still love your characters! They have so much personality!"

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Going to love it!

"Besides a few errors such as referring to something that is belonging to someone or something remember to use 's after wards such as (only an example) Ella's Dress... and when it already ends with an 's' you can just use the ' at the end such Salis' knife. This was the only few thing I could notice happens a lot. Now on to the rest of the review! The story has just started and like with the first book, I can definitely see that this is going to be just as timeless to read, as you continue writing and re-editing along the journey of the creation of this second book! I love how you started the story, it was what drew me to read the rest of the first chapter! And now want to see it through to the end. Hope to see more chapters up soon! (Will adjust review as I continue to read)"

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