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What is your opinion?
Nice start!
"I gotta say, this story definitely has a kind of twist into it. It has just the right amount of action blended in with suspense and romance. Loved it :) I was a little confused about when her flashbacks were occurring and when the real story was going. The signal is somewhat unclear. Also, there are a lot of extra spaces that are not needed in this story. But that's just a little problem. Anyways, great job! I can't wait to see where this will go :)"
Chapter Four- the past revisits
"Kept me captivated. Makes me want to read the story from start to finish. A few grammar mistakes, but all in all, chapter four was great. "
