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emotional!

"“Hearts of stone” is a really emotional poem. I could somehow relate to the plot, as our world is often very cruel and you do wonder do “ they all have hearts of stone”? Hope to read more of you. Keep it up!"

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Great Work :)

"I really like your rhyming couplets and the images you paint with your writing style. It's simple yet complex, and simplicity can go a long way, especially with poetry like this. I think the messages in the poems are weaved into it in a clever way. Keep up the great work!"

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A great effort

"Much to touch the soul here... Though the rhyming couplets were sometimes naive, the message was one that I could readily identify with. Just one spelling error (monster - should be monsters). Keep working at these poems, you have a certain flair that, with practice, will blossom into something very worthwhile. Thanks for posting!"

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