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What is your opinion?
Ain't a Power in the Verse
"This story was great. It wasn't super long, but also wasn't lacking in any details because of its length. It was truly like an actual episode of the show."
Firefly Season 2 Episode 1
"Extremely well written and easy to read. With any bit of Firefly knowledge and imagination its effortless to picture the characters going through the events in this story. This could be a TV episode. One minor thing I noticed is Fallons first name changed from Markus to Darrion. Not 100% sure if this was intentional or not but it gave me a moment of "wait a minute", where I had to go back and re-read to make sure I didn't miss a Fallon brother or something that Lionel was pointing a gun at. Other than that I thoroughly enjoyed the story."
