What is your opinion?
91 days
"I really enjoy reading your story. I was going to only read a couple of chapters but I couldn't help but keep going. I'm going to get back to it as soon as I can. Great book."
Amazing
"You are such a great author with a great writing style and I absolutely adore your books. There were mistakes here and there, but that can be fixed. Love all your works!"
91 days
"Hello Moi Moi. I don't know how to delete reviews, so I have removed the text in the one I wrote for you. Perhaps you are able to delete it? I don't write reviews for work I have not appreciated, so I have given five stars for all aspects of your writing, since to offer less would seem unfair without an explanation. I hope you will be inspired, stay safe, and live a good, happy life! Martin Sharratt"
Great read!
"Great story ! It hooks you from the stat and leaves your mouth watering for your more! The writer style it just make it easy for you to engage with the plot and now I just want to know more! Well done."
A Heartbreaking And Heartfelt Story
"I love the concept of this story, and I look forward to see where it goes. It is a sad concept, but it sheds light on the significant things in life and all the things people take for granted, and I think that is a very important lesson to learn. Over all, the writing is really good, but I think it is a rough draft because of the missing punctuation, but once it's proofread, it will be golden."
Great Concept.
"I like the idea of a rare disease where you only have a certain amount of time left, Thats really cool. You have a really good way of describing depression in chapter three. The dynamic between father and son is amazing. And the spontaneous road trip, there's a lot of potential there. Keep up the good work, Sofia"
Spectacular.
"Wow, the concept of this story is jarring. I read the first line and I was shaken. The solemnity of her dire situation but the parallax of her relationship with her father is truly intriguing. I admire the expertise of the writing in expansive simplicity. I'm eager to find out what happens."
Outstanding
"Love the overall plot for this story. I found myself getting more and more pulled into the story. I think the author does a great job in capturing her reader's attention in the opening of the book. Great job."
91 Days
"I just read the first three chapters and I really do consider this book an excellent start. The plot flows well with the suspense the author is trying to create with this story so we'll done with that. The tile itself is really interesting and attracts the readers attention more I really want to know more about Alastor and His Dad what adventure will they find? Overall I really think this book should be rated as one of the number #1 suspense book. Small tip: Visualize more what you can add in your book don't write another chapter just because your followers beg you to do it for yourself and write because you have the talent to do so. Splendid Job! Keep me updated with your work please 😁 -Leslie H."
It’s a great start!
"I read the first three chapters as well as the premise. I like the start so far! Here are a few things that did catch my eye. Grammar: For example: In prologue, first paragraph, you put of instead of off. As well as in the seventh paragraph you missed periods and misspelled word. But regardless of the mistakes it did not take me out of the story! Structure: One thing that did throw me off was the story structure. Usually in a book, 4 or more sentences is standard to form a paragraph. But, I feel as if this book is suppose to be like In a diary style. If so, does a great job in capturing the inner emotion that the character is going through as their time is ticking down! Conclusion: All in all, it’s a great start to a book that I feel has a lot to offer! Also, just a personal note, I recommend if you haven’t seen it, there is a movie called, “out of time.” Which funny enough stars Justin Timberlake. The premise of the movie is similar to yours and I highly recommend watching it!. Who knows! Might give you inspiration for your own story!"
Super intriguing and gripping narrative!
"Moi-Moi's 91 Days is such an intriguing piece of fiction. While it puts the narrator in a dystopian-like scenario of only having 91 days left to live, it also begins in the most jaw-dropping way possible: the curt cliffhanger of "My name is Alastor Huxley, and I have 91 days left to live." hooks the reader immediately and invites us to delve further into this tale. After reading the prologue and first chapter 1, it's evident that this story has a lot of care being put into it to properly tell Alastor's tale. The way the writer embodies Alastor's voice makes Alastor feel as though he is real, as though the reader can really be inside his head. The more serious moments of doom ("I have 91 days left to live") are paralleled in chapter 1 by a wonderful father-son dynamic, with Alastor's thoughts about his father's life and potential love interest. For someone who only has 91 days left, he feels so alive and painfully aware of it. I am looking forward to reading more chapters of this! Thank you Moi-Moi for sharing such a lovely story with the Inkitt community."
91 Days
"An intriguing plot that is unfolding slowly but surely. The mysterious Izumi is a very intriguing character and I wonder what is going to happen next. It's very well written, easy reading and well paced. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and seeing where the story goes. I wonder if Alastor really does only have 91 days."
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"It's a great start. I like the premise of the story, 91 days to live. I think the author can definitely dig deep into some interesting ideas: depression, living each day fully etc. I also like that the relationship that's centre in the story (so far) is the one between father and child. I also like the style of the author who dives straight into the crux of the story and doesn't overload the readers with detailed descriptions of each character and their clothing. I'm interested to see where the author will take this story :) Don't forget to edit :)"
I’m loving the story so far!
"I absolutely love the plot of this book! I wanted to know what happened next the second I finished the first chapter. You’re doing great! It’s extremely intriguing and I can’t wait for an update to read the rest of the book <3"
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"Wonderful plot! Keep working on it! The cover art is breathtaking."
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"Hm. 91 days left to live gives you a lot to think about, no? Well, I gave it a 3-star review because the book isn't finished. And I felt as though the hospital scene could've been drawn out a little bit more. Like, how she felt when she got the news; how her heart dropped to her stomach but she wanted to keep a strong face for her already crumbling father. The doctor's discomfort giving the news to the already dying girl in the bed. And the two chapters here would've been better told in third person point of view, to capture all the emotions. Don't get me wrong, it wasn't bad - it just needs a little work! Finish the book and I'll review it again. loves! stay cynful!"
