What is your opinion?
Amazing Story!
"I really enjoyed this story! It kept me hooked."
Great
"Great story with relatable concepts. The writer makes us immerse and relate to the main character through her thoughts and actions. Good work! "
Loved it!
"The story is great and have a smooth flow. It is really easy to catch up with words and easy to imagine the scenes in the head. It is very well written. Keep up the good work! "
Honest
"I love how honest this story was. The characters were all nicely portrait and even without the notice I think one would have been able to pick up that the story is based on real-life experience and relationships. A few grammar and stylist errors, but nothing that cannot be fixed with some more editing. Overall very good story and as said before, very honest and real."
A soulmate who wasn't mine
"I absolutely love this story! It feels so real and although I picked up a few grammatical errors, it just didn't matter. Your work is amazing. So realistic and much of the "show, don't tell" kinda thing which makes it a thousand times better. All the best and keep up the good work!"
Love this!
"Love this so far! I’m obsessed with your characters, they feel so real and distinct, I can always tell who’s talking and they all have their own personalities and quirks, which I love. The writing style flows nicely, with plenty of detail to visualize without getting overloaded. This may just be aesthetics, but my one suggestion is to start a new paragraph whenever someone new is talking. I’ve played around with this in my own writing and I find that dialogue, especially between 2 people, flows and clips along better. But that’s just me, do what works for you and your writing :) overall I’m impressed! Great job! "
Memories
"This story being personal to you makes it so much better. This reminds me of the group of friends I had in high school. I was always lay of the group lol. I think this is a really good story thus far and I would be interested in reading on. Each person's role in the story is clear and that is great! great job!"
A soulmate who wasn’t mine
"Really interesting! The beginning and plot was so good I knew I would love this book! Plus each character is unique in different ways Loved it :D"
Great YA
"Above anything, this book is a source of nostalgia for me. Considering this situation, and all. Leaving that it's a great high school romance book, considering the amount of awkwardness. The writing style is good but, in the 3rd or 4th chapter you had added your own opinion as the narrator. That's good but I suggest you stay a little consistent. Because after that you never included yourself in the story. So I think you should choose if you want to be a part of the story or not. The grammar can be improved but that's OK. Lastly, it is great because it is pretty relatable. So I recommend you to read this book if you are missing school, or want to relive your memories. P.S. Just my brutal honesty, not me, my brutal honesty wants to say that the book cover and title is great but till now I haven't, I mean my brutal honesty hasn't found a relation between them. "
Raw and So Real
"I am astonished at the courage of this author to take something so personal and make it so public. The writing itself is raw--how could it not be? She's relating her own life--but the passion undeniable. I hope this is not the last we see of this author"
