What is your opinion?
A Deal To Be Made
"This is a great story. The way the author writes each sentence and describes each scene is beautifully structured. The pace of the story is just nice for a romance-thriller kind of genre, where the romance takes precedence with small slots of thriller here and there. And there are a lot of surprises in the plot which make me hooked and attached to this story from start to the end. Good job."
Amazing
"Your story is truly amazing. I like all the characters, very well explained. This story has capability to stuck the readers with chapters. I really like the character of Blythe, she is strong, facing the daily problems like a courageous person. Instead of sitting and doing nothing she decides to set some rules for herself and fight the odds. I really like her relation with father and Julip the mare as well. After death of her mother their lives get scattered but still she is coping up well. Thomas I mean MacKenzie( if you know😉) is a strong, intimidating personality and these two gets along well. Overall amazing Keep going!"
Very engaging!
"(completed) This was a really interesting read! I love stories set 'back in the day' and this one didn't at all disappoint. The writing style was quite 'old time-y' and definitely added to the atmosphere of the piece. The writer developed their characters very well, especially Blythe: she was a strong, independent woman who certainly gave Mackenzie a run for his money (literally!). The dynamic between them was intriguing and I felt they were very well matched - which made the ending even more heart-breaking, though I very much admire the writer being realistic about that. The descriptions were very well done too, as was the dialogue. I liked that the writer didn't shy away from gorier scenes, especially given the nature of Mackenzie's enterprise. I also liked how Blythe's relationships outside of Mackenzie were developed rather than having everything be about her romantic attachments. The dates and locations given at the start of each chapter were a nice addition too, not something you usually see, but they fit well here and gave a sense of the passage of time. There were a few grammar errors (misspellings, tense changes), but nothing that detracted from the story. A good edit will surely catch them all no bother. Good job with this! Congratulations on finishing your first story, it's a wonderful feeling and achievement :D"
