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“You son of a bitch! You killed my baby! I hate you! I hate you! Die! You bastard!” Charles was trying to hold on to Shaylin and avoid her punches. She punched, slapped, and kicked him, screaming and crying. Charles was trying to get a hold of her arms and hug her saying, “Shaylin! Please! I’m sorry. It wasn’t my fault! Please baby stop! I love you! We can get through this; Please!” An officer ran over and grabbed Shaylin and tried to restrain her. She fought against him trying to get at Charles. Another police officer put handcuffs on Charles. Shaylin yelled, “Good! You son of a bitch! I hope they fry your ass!” Charles looked at Shaylin with tears in his eyes and said, “Shaylin! Please! I never meant for this to happen! Please, baby, I love you!” Shaylin shook out of the policeman's hold; walked up to Charles then spit on him and said, “You will go to hell for this! I hate you!” Then she ran out of the hospital crying. “Shaylin! Shaylin! Please listen! Please! Shaylin! Don't leave me, love! SHAYLIN!” Charles yelled, struggling against the officers holding him as they watched Shaylin run out of the hospital.
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Fiona Walker: What a wonderfully brilliant story. As always, really well written and edited with a great storyline, it seems there’s no genre this really talented author can’t write! All the characters are really likeable even poor wet Cameron lol and the sub story is one I’d really like to read *hint hint*I hav...
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Lynn Hamilton: Author does an amazing job of creating a story that will make you feel like you’re there and part of the story. Very descriptive and well written. The book has a great plot that makes it interesting and coming back for more.
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Adetutu Akinfaderin: I like the plot of the story in general ,though it’s a bit sad it isnt so long as I would have wanted but that’s fine , I’ll definitely recommend it to my friends whose name is actually Shay 😁😁
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Lillipad0234: Teenagers making silly mistakes and then realising what they’ve lost. There are a few dramas along the way, but the characters feel realistic and the storyline is believable. I really enjoyed watching their second chance unfold and ended up reading the whole book within 48 hours! 😂❤️A lovely second...
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Bargara4670: This was a refreshingly different love story. Both Hadleigh and Grant were strong and likeable characters. It was satisfying to see their relationship develop. I wonder if this story will be the first in a series. I would be interested to find out if Marina is bonded.
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