What is your opinion?
Keep up the good work!
"You’re doing such an amazing job and I’m so proud of you for writing this story even though English isn’t your first language. The story is amazing and I can’t wait to see where it heads!! Keep being amazing and don’t give up my love ❤️"
My Half Damon
"Really good start. The plot is interesting and makes me want to read more. Although something about some parts of the writing - maybe because in chapter one you're writing past-tense - and most of the dialogue make it hard to read. Maybe it's just my personal opinion but some of the dialogue sounds almost robotic."
Amazing
"Amazing indeed "
My half demon
"I like the story, it's interesting. The plot is great but there are plenty of grammatical errors which can be rectified easily. Good Luck!!"
Somebody Save Me! and me!
"(Tags: WIP, reviewed to Chapter 11) Description: A pair of sisters are moving out into the world,. The family they have lived with has secrets they have kept hidden all their lives. When reaching out to a friend, they get jobs and move away to a big city, where Tiara's life is turned upside down, revealing that she has a choice to make about who she is and what she can do. Pros: World Building is there; I get an idea of what and where the author wants to take me. Characters have distinct personalities, always a plus. Divine beings always a plus. We got werewolves and an idea of their hierarchy. Cons: The author is still working on her English as the language is not her primary. Many mistakes in grammar and punctuation are spelled correctly but often used in the wrong way. That I can chop this up to learning the language; this makes the story a challenging read. Overall: The story has potential, will require heavy editing and reworking to make the story more palatable. Favorite Character: Tiara, the main protagonist, we are following her journey. Favorite Villian: Sierra, sneaky rat. I was not expecting her to be someone who was going betray the sisters; I thought of her as a friend. I don't know exactly what they were planning, but it did not look good. Last Note: Keep writing and practicing, and I can see a difference between the first chapter and the last that I read., I will review the books a little later to see what new improvements you make. Good luck and keep writing; remember you only get better by practice."
